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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? đ in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
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Hi!! Sorry it has taken me so long to respond! We went camping, and then my computer kept saying I couldn’t access the website, and then when I could, I couldn’t post anything XD So, let’s try this again! đ
WINGIBY IGGIBY!!!! LOL, howâs your stories been, howâve you been, howâve your characters been (lol, dying, I know XD)?!
I’ve been great, my characters have been in pain (no deaths yet, but someone will have to go at some point . . . . *cue evil laugh*), and my stories have been paining me! So yeah lol I’m well-rounded over here . . . .
Ohhh goodness! Theyâthey were gonna be pulled out of the Castle a couple months ago but I was like âoh Iâll just yaâknow have âem have their first kiss firstâ MONTHS ago!!! Andâ 😈 heheheh 😈âyou just missed Rosario kiss a shapeshifter she thought was Ehud! It was glorious! And now theyâre chilling on a bridge over an abysmal abyss thatâs crumbling soooâŠ😁
Oh my goodness, I MISSED THAT?!?! WHAT AM I DOING WITH MY LIFE?!?! Epic, so epic . . .. .
btw howâs Ahab been? Ah he was such an interesting character LOL remember when they first got dropped into the character castle and he just burst into the library like âWHOEVERâS IN THEIR IS GONNA PAY!!!â And then him and âMiss Murderâ! It was glorious chaos!!
I KNOW!!!! I loved that part, and I loved playing him so much! I have such a weird sense of humor, so it was great. But actually, he’s like four stories behind me now, LOL (yes that is how many novels I have started and not finished within like a year, so yeah). But, now that I think of it, I will have to resurrect him . . . either I’ll find a way to fit him into my new WIP, or I’ll give him his own short story — which I really think he deserves. You just gave me a world of new ideas!!! đ












