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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
That’s a brilliant idea! *Hurriedly looks up picture prompt* Wow, your description was flawless! That looks exactly like I imagined it!
Thank you! 😀
You’re totally welcome! I can’t wait to see it in its proper place as the winner! 😀 You did awesomely and I’m glad I got to read it! It had me thinking about it for hours afterward.
Aw, thanks! I’m so glad you liked it 🙂
Physics buddies! *High fives* My books should arrive tomorrow, and then I have to suffer through that for the next year. I have biology and physics as my exam subjects this year. (whY did I choose so many sciences? I hate science! XD Oh, wait. The alternative was geography and economy. Blech.)
Whoa, ouch! I feel your pain, XD!
That’s so cool, piano is a lovely instrument! Don’t you play guitar too?
I know! I love piano 🙂 And yeah, I was taking guitar lessons, but then I decided I wanted to swap them for piano, so yeah, now I’m playing piano.
Oh, I can’t wait to read your fabulous stories! Please do post them on here if you feel like it, I love reading them!
Oh, thanks! I will totally do that! And if you have any stories I’d love to read them! I’m not sure how great critique I could give, but I just love reading that stuff for the sake of reading it anyway, lol
OOh, I can barely keep hold of the little brat XD *Whacks Liorah over the head with both manuscripts.* Stop! Picking! Fights! With! Everyone!
XD 😛 But you’ve gotta admit: her type of character is one of the most fun to write! Which is your favorite character out of your novels?
I finished the first draft of the second book a few weeks ago! It ended up being 120k long, which was longer than I’d thought but I’m really proud of it! And now I’m going back to rewriting book 1!
*Blows and horn and spouts confetti and runs around with a cake above her head screaming “whoo! whoo! whoooo!!!” I congratulate you!!!! That is awesome!!!! (Especially since I’ve never finished any novel and so I know how much stamina its got to take)
And I’m kicking the ideas for that Edwardian standalone into a corner because it won’t leave me alone but I can’t start writing it now XD
Oooo, was that the one with the dressmaker in it, if I remember right? And those “plot bunnies” are so annoying!!
And yours? Are you still working on Dancrow and Kiark’s manuscripts?
*shuffles feet and looks at the ceiling* So, no . . . . I can’t stay focused for long, lol. Right now I’m working on another fantasy, but I am determined NOT to give up on it. I will plod forward if only an inch at a time until it comes to realization. That is if I don’t see another plot bunny first. (oh, and you remembered their names!)
Besides that, (home)school started this week, so my time has suddenly diminished XD I’ve been drawing a lot over the vacation, otherwise just life as usual 🙂
Totally get it! Add that to getting distracted watching Studio C on YouTube, and that’s why I never get anything done 😛












