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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Alpha-Readers for a Cowritten Sci-Fi Novel in the forum Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@theinvizibleman Yes, it’s on comment access. π
@ajaj2000 Thanks! Oh…um…sorry ’bout forgetting to mention this…the prologue is not finished yet. Sorry! I’ll post when the prologue is finished so you guys can read the full thing. π Sorry!
Oh, okay.
βSince there was no schoolβ at least till later because at that moment we have no idea what time it is so to me I read it as he takes his bed to school XD.
😂🤣😂🤣 This cracked me up. Oh, sure. I always have trouble describing settings…. I’ll probably gradually build up the house, since more of the story will take place there. Thank you! π
@kara-lynn Thank you! Yeah…sorry ’bout not letting you guys know that the prologue isn’t done yet…. π Oh, okay. I’ll work on the news. π Thanks!
@sarah-narnathron Hmm…okay. Do you have any suggestions to that matter? Yeah, that makes sense. I’ll forward these comments to my cowriter as well. Hmm…I’ll work on this. Thanks for the advice! Ooh, yes, I like the second version a lot better. π Thanks so much! Aliens…*tries not to spoil book*
@devastate-lasting Lol. The more comments the better though! Okay. I’ll see what I can do, your comments make sense. Hmm. Yes. WhoΒ is this mysterious Jonathan Brown? *ponders* Thanks! π
@morreafirebird Thanks! Hmm. Okay. I’ll think over what to do. π Ooh! I like your idea of the government cutting it off! I’ll definitely think it over! Thank you! π
Thanks all! You guys are awesome alpha readers! π π π












