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  • William Norfleet started the topic Newest But Eventually Older Critique in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago

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    Vim and Vigour

    When walking on along the shore

    You stop and sight a thickly hall

    That, lights a’shine, is loud and long

    And ever bright, the windows strong;

    They sprout the wing and sing to fly

    Into the wind and off the sea

    That crisp and thick, is sheltered not

    And plastered wick, the beach is hot.

    Then walking up and to the door

    It opens and he steps the inn.

    Lights a’shine within the ‘liers

    That iron-cast are white with tears.

    Round the room the tables spread

    And thickly laid with buttered bread.

    Then not to mention ‘ll other such

    Aliments that when the mutter

    Would, last, escape the mouth – the tender

    And finally to pass the bender

    Unto the irons, so hot with fire

    That whence ere on the evening’s bar

    Had long been taken upon the roar-

    The red, the yellow, not blue, but black

    The fire swallowed all in the sack

    For there had been the laiden rack,

    And that so full of mood that air

    Could not escape nor come back in.

    Then up the table a man a’soars

    And shouts aloud for all to hear, 

    “Ahoy! Ye lads! And hearken me!

    I think I spy a new lad here!

    Come now on and have a drop

    Tis nothing more than cider throp!”

    True to his word, the drink was well

    And many did he swallow there.

    For sweet but sharp was cider and

    The mugs were shaped the barrel hand

    So as to look as if the load

    Was larger than it would appear.

    But naught was he to be induced

    Unto the table where laiden few

    T’was covered far too largely for

    His stomache to hold out and all.

    The laughter, song, and merriment was

    Of vim and vigour, for many o’ them

    Were wide a’belt and strong the arm

    The beard was, to, a kindly hue.

    So not were they the drunken few

    For cider was the token brew.

    And apple, plum, and peach there too

    Did water down the richest food

    For there the cook was jovial

    And wide, she too, her husband so.

    Now, they had cooked many a year

    Within that merry sea-side build

    And family were all there to

    Be happily and there be wed

    The young man who in far the start

    Had only sought to take apart

    The threads that had entwined his mind

    And there also within his heart.

    For courage did he need and so

    He happened out upon the stow’

    And there courage he did acquire

    And after he arranged and dire

    The need did he and so he knelt

    In front of his ‘loved damsel

    And propose and finally the pearl

    Did say the yes and after few

    Short months they were united in

    That burly place, that welcomed them

    And all the years, did far they see

    It fit to occupy that space

    And in the end they rested long

    Within the back, that merry throng.

    I wrote this some time ago and left it to the dust of my documents.

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