Story Embers | Vivian Grant | Mentions https://storyembers.org/members/vivian-grant/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning Vivian Grant. Mon, 27 Apr 2026 16:21:45 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 bddae2b789ddf59c2991821f7b363843 Kristianne replied to the topic Short Story here! in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/88303/ Sat, 16 Jan 2021 08:27:44 -0400 @vivian-grant

Oh, and by the way, that’s fine if fancy dialogue tags are your thing. I totally understand because I used to use them a lot too! I was just suggesting what my writing teacher had pointed out. The reader won’t think you’re boring if you use “said” a lot since the dialogue, not the tags are the most important part. The tags are just…[Read more]

]]> 0 22a4930fb865113c7c932b4c213d099d Kristianne replied to the topic Short Story here! in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/88302/ Sat, 16 Jan 2021 08:21:11 -0400 @vivian-grant

That makes sense. And you’re welcome! I’m glad I could help! πŸ™‚

]]> 0 9b529ae6833df15dafe5d629d87802f9 Ella replied to the topic Short Story here! in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/88276/ Fri, 15 Jan 2021 20:22:38 -0400 @vivian-grant

Whoa, that’s SUPER creepy!!!!!! 😃Β  SUPER COOL, though, thanks for sharing!!!!

A couple of comments:

1)Β  That scene where Wren yelled at the Smilers was a little confusing.Β  Why would she do that if she knows how dangerous the Smilers are?Β  I think it would be better for Gladys to freak out instead of Wren, because Wren knows mor…[Read more]

]]> 0 8c95cd0715b6f7ea756a43885c46afb5 Kristianne replied to the topic Short Story here! in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/88269/ Fri, 15 Jan 2021 17:48:07 -0400 @vivian-grant

Ooh, it’s so creepy, but I love it! The ending is really powerful, and I love how you developed the theme of needing to be informed about the danger to know how to fight it. It reminds me of this quote by C.S. Lewis: β€œSince it is so likely that (children) will meet cruel enemies, let them at least have heard of brave knights and h…[Read more]

]]> 0 6c5196f75e79ecfb10cb74cc1130ed79 Ella replied to the topic Book Description Feedback in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/88141/ Mon, 11 Jan 2021 22:16:25 -0400 @vivian-grant

Great, thanks!

]]> 0 671bd7f37e67e754f21b690c6cbbf975 Ella replied to the topic Book Description Feedback in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/88134/ Mon, 11 Jan 2021 20:29:45 -0400 @vivian-grant

love it!! Β Much better! 😉

I’ll let you know if I’m free to beta read your short storyβ€”I have a pretty packed schedule at the moment. Β I’d definitely be interested though!!! 😃

]]> 0 66e220459e711e7e4e90409b969ebf76 Ella replied to the topic Book Description Feedback in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/88000/ Thu, 07 Jan 2021 14:29:58 -0400 @vivian-grant

I think if you combined the first and second one to introduce Wren and the creatures, it would be more compelling.Β  I also like @zee ‘s suggestions.Β  Amazing concept!!!

]]> 0 638fbf4038ec39ea1fd08053fff30dba Arindown replied to the topic Prologue feedback in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/80656/ Fri, 12 Jun 2020 16:29:38 -0400 @vivian-grant I read it. It was good, but I think you could make it more dramatic. Maybe more facial expressions?

And, I also think you hook the reader by putting in more stakes. What will it cost the man? Is this life and death? Loosing a fortune? You don’t have to give details, just give enough to make me want to know the answer.

Sorry if I’m…[Read more]

]]> 0 bcedc2cc318e165e71bac6deb7d3e41d Sam M replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78499/ Wed, 06 May 2020 23:46:28 -0400 @vivian-grant Those are good points. And I can definitely see your theme now. Keep up the good work!

]]> 0 b07c0821c194f5d46a90af3d33553b32 Sam M replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78266/ Mon, 04 May 2020 23:24:33 -0400 @vivian-grant Hi, Vivian!

I thought Phoenix and Innolan were interesting characters and I enjoyed their relationship and dialogue. I also enjoyed the gothic feel of the story. And well done on the setting.

Ferand could maybe stand a little more development and time in the story. (I did think it was well done that you put him in the scene in the…[Read more]

]]> 0 df1470b1cadbb22f90ffda6092a8cbe8 Beth replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78193/ Mon, 04 May 2020 05:26:59 -0400 @vivian-grant

I don’t know what the heck is wrong! I have written a LONG comment TWO times and they are not here!!!!! Why???????????

]]> 0 68c1b681bb058b7e38b74b4f99d3d01b Beth replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78109/ Sat, 02 May 2020 00:51:20 -0400 @vivian-grant

Hey!

I can read it if you want!

]]> 0 eae9b678e5d77d61056eb6bc876db63a Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78101/ Fri, 01 May 2020 21:51:57 -0400 @vivian-grant As of right this very moment I don’t have any more beta reading time available, but that changes on a week to week basis. If you’re still looking for feeback next weekend (or really any time, I guess) please feel free to hit me up!

]]> 0 f5434870aabc330e98367f1a77727541 Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78089/ Fri, 01 May 2020 16:30:15 -0400 @vivian-grant Thanks for the tag! Unfortunately, I’m trying not to commit to too much right now as far as beta-reading and tons of writing projects, so I’m gonna have to back out of this one. If you don’t have a deadline, I can try to read it as I’m able, but we’ll see πŸ™‚

]]> 0 a255886f4f1f34e6c50e432a8d34cfe9 Esther Sears replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers :) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/77643/ Mon, 20 Apr 2020 13:31:46 -0400 @dakota Thanks so much!! I’m glad you enjoyed it! πŸ˜€

@vivian-grant Actually a lot of people beta-reading for me aren’t on Story Embers, so I thought it would be easier to just do the same thing for everyone, since everyone has email πŸ™‚ And I’ll post to my blog after the beta-readers have it πŸ˜€

]]> 0 f4a104afecf71a81c9a7d8bec6fd757f Esther Sears replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers :) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/77406/ Tue, 14 Apr 2020 14:10:08 -0400 @vivian-grant @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @the-inkspiller

Thank you all so much for reading!!

Yes, it did seem a little short to me too. I like the idea about adding more with the sharks so maybe I’ll try that!

And nope, this was not taken out any other projects πŸ˜‰ This story is all there is! It’s an interesting thought to turn it into a…[Read more]

]]> 0 2bd3e9d13459dfaf9728920ec1a3003d Esther Sears replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers :) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/77405/ Tue, 14 Apr 2020 14:00:47 -0400 @vivian-grant Great!! You’ve been very helpful so far so I’d love to steal you for my core group!! πŸ˜€ I’m trying to figure out how exactly to communicate exactly… Would you be comfortable/willing to use email?

]]> 0 5e45bd4659fbc97411ccf0b7fa17dedc Esther Sears started the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers :) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/77359/ Mon, 13 Apr 2020 17:43:03 -0400 Hey guys!!

So I have a super short, fun little piece of flash fiction that I’d like some feedback on! It’s only about 500 words, about a character who argues with the author about his death πŸ˜€

(I’m tagging people who have critiqued for me before… If anyone is interested, I’d really like to form a core group of beta-readers to proofread for me…[Read more]

]]> 0 10435c6fc65b77c7ec404f7463a1ab4d Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76757/ Fri, 27 Mar 2020 11:45:22 -0400 @esther-sears

Oof! The whole thing was moving!!Β  But I guess particularly the end. As far as anything I would have change. . . I think @vivian-grant already said all that needed to be said!

You are in the Meraki guild!! That’s the guild my sis is in. Dakota.

]]> 0 e5d9f747b1aed9e3550b7f007140eb65 Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76723/ Thu, 26 Mar 2020 18:38:57 -0400 @vivian-grant

Ikr? It’s so beautiful!! Your story sounds interesting as well.

Are you new in Story Embers?

 

]]> 0 66537dfcd8e29ca929be7c5ce45d0acc Esther Sears replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76536/ Sat, 21 Mar 2020 16:01:05 -0400 @vivian-grant

Okay, first of all, I’M SO SORRY IT TOOK ME SO LONG πŸ™ πŸ™ The last couple weeks have been rough ones, and in all the chaos I somehow forgot all about this πŸ™ But I just finished reading the second part!! πŸ˜€ (And I KNOW I gave you my comments from the first part, but when I went to look I couldn’t find them? Did you ever get…[Read more]

]]> 0 b373d66c90aae9861d96bb5cfc9bf0b2 Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76517/ Fri, 20 Mar 2020 22:23:10 -0400 @vivian-grant I really don’t think what seem like similarities to ET matter at all. You really only have a few surface level similarities. Even the “sharing wounds” is more like “when the alien gets sick, the main character gets sick” in the movie.

]]> 0 51303006a28f4f04e3b0f1a88e2babf0 Sam M replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76494/ Fri, 20 Mar 2020 18:35:00 -0400 @vivian-grant

First off, I enjoyed your story -thanks for letting me read it. πŸ™‚

I do have a few suggestions:

#1 I feel like your story could benefit from more showing and less telling. For example, when Wendy is in the woods, instead of saying she’s scared, you could do something like: “Wendy’s breath became strained as they rushed further…[Read more]

]]> 0 01689cdebca1903cf9c9f230c1f5ad5d Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76357/ Wed, 18 Mar 2020 00:44:57 -0400 @vivian-grant I’m glad I could be useful! By ET, I meant the movie, not trying to imply the creature was an alien. Like, the “befriend a child, share wounds with it, looong fingers, adults don’t really know what’s going on, hospital tries to contain it, escape, happy ending for benevolent misunderstood creature.” Which is also very different from…[Read more]

]]> 0 5612b988388aa77e543f9dd1cff5de77 Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76336/ Tue, 17 Mar 2020 16:57:06 -0400 @vivian-grant As far as I’m aware, not in the same exact functionality with editing and commenting and decent privacy settings built into a tolerantly responsive editor.

There’s always pastebin for simple sharing, though other people can’t comment on the page. There’s the online version of MS Word, which probably functions similarly to Google…[Read more]

]]> 0 5301f3ea0900dca25e6a6c5fcfc0f865 Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76334/ Tue, 17 Mar 2020 16:36:41 -0400 @vivian-grant That link doesn’t work. It looks like a download link from an email inbox, which isn’t going to work for anyone not logged into your account. Most people around here host on Google Docs and then use the link sharing function in it.

]]> 0 c4056b221a2ab9b2ccd09eb9d62ed95f Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76215/ Sun, 15 Mar 2020 19:28:19 -0400 @vivian-grant

Sooooo saaaaaadddddd!!!!!!

Loki just made me very sad. . . seeing the way that was portrayed. . . . . *breaks down again*

And Civil war. . . me and my friend were talking about poor Bucky today. . . the poor guy. . . *realizes this might seem like I’m implying things about him*

*decides to stop talking* xD

]]> 0 7de152d063d012e02873b214a34e48c3 Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76210/ Sun, 15 Mar 2020 19:02:06 -0400 @vivian-grant

*is speechless*

Just watched Thor and Civil War this weekend.

I. Am. Dying. Still.Β 

Gotta say, those movies were great. . . *silent tear falls*

My heart. . . My head . . .*groans* Help me!

]]> 0 f83ba0dd0d3e0e4c49859efee2b45a83 Livi Ryddle replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76131/ Fri, 13 Mar 2020 17:36:58 -0400 @vivian-grant Nope! And yep! I can’t stand the people who are all like “ew, the prequels are awful! They’re cheesy and blah blah.”

I thought the acting was phenomenal. The actors did an awesome job of making their character memorable, and can we just take a minute to appreciate Ewan McGregor and Liam Neeson??

The story-line was awesome as well!

]]> 0 1d773e3cd50993ca6534aed718546342 Livi Ryddle replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76122/ Fri, 13 Mar 2020 17:13:37 -0400 @vivian-grant

*nods*

From the movies I’ve seen (the three prequels, Rogue One, and the Rise of Skywalker), I think you’re right. They kinda seemed to be running out of steam. Though to be honest? I really enjoyed tRoS. And I think I’m not going to enjoy the original trilogy as much as I enjoyed the prequels. Idk why, but that’s what I feel…[Read more]

]]> 0 06f8cbd21e5999f953a8938dc2144c40 Livi Ryddle replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76116/ Fri, 13 Mar 2020 16:51:19 -0400 @vivian-grant

*nods* I’m planning on doing that at some point… I simply haven’t the time at the moment, nor anywhere to watch them. We don’t have a TV, or a Netflix account or anything. I’ll probably end up watching them at my aunt’s or grandparents’ πŸ™‚ But also I want to finish the rest of the Star Wars movies before I start on another…[Read more]

]]> 0 c5af7d8b9c026e7dca562d8b91a399b4 Livi Ryddle replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76094/ Fri, 13 Mar 2020 01:31:55 -0400 @vivian-grant *distressed fangirl noises*

Which story? Yours? (not picking up on the hint though XD) I did, and it’s awesome!! Let’s see… I think I had some comments but I think I forgot them. -_-

Um. I like Owl!! I would love to read more about him. And I like the witch lady and her friend/lover/whoever (forgot his name). I can’t decide if…[Read more]

]]> 0 efa0cabc90bb2e334b606ed387701d65 PenSword replied to the topic Greetings Other Humans (I think) in the forum Horror writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76067/ Thu, 12 Mar 2020 03:13:54 -0400 @the-inkspiller

Thanks for the link! I’ll have to read a story or two sometime.

@vivian-grant

I have not actually written anything I’d call horror yet, although I have some ideas. I could see how that’d be difficult though. I think with other stories I’ve gotten the advice of focusing more on what the characters are feeling, rather than what…[Read more]

]]> 0 2e7c677e01588cb76d40105d86594b1e Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76061/ Thu, 12 Mar 2020 00:44:14 -0400 @vivian-grant

Oh my word yes!!!! Some of the best of the best quotes!!!!

]]> 0 dde8b94b78ff07b7ca61d9dcdd460a7a Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76057/ Thu, 12 Mar 2020 00:25:02 -0400 @vivian-grant

Fine then, XD Marvel. Favorite Marvel villain. XD Which now that I think about it, is actually true. XD XD

Winter Soldier has a soundtrack that I’ve been listening to on loop for a while now. XD It’s just that good! I also find myself listening to “End of the Line” which is the saddest song in the soundtrack probably. πŸ™‚

I laughed…[Read more]

]]> 0 c7109a31cdc447fd6860fa89c82968e8 Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76054/ Thu, 12 Mar 2020 00:13:00 -0400 @vivian-grant

*has tears in eyes again* SPOILER ALERT FOR ANYONE READING THIS WHO HAS NOT SEEN THE MOVIES: Bucky. . . .Β  *breaks down again with no sign of stopping*

LOKI THO!!!!!!!!! He’s mah favorite villain of all time!!!!

I’ve seen The first Avenger, Winter soldier, The Avengers, and Age of Ultron. Planning on watching Civil War next, or…[Read more]

]]> 0 5cc99bf2a3f7deaa6a8def5c9a50b6fc Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76052/ Thu, 12 Mar 2020 00:02:59 -0400 @vivian-grant

Okay! Thank you for the warning! XD

*has just finished Winter soldier the other day and is STILL in denial*

I TOLD MY SISTER THAT WE DIDN’T HAVE PROOF THAT THAT CHARACTER DIED!!!! I TOLD HER HE COULD HAVE SURVIVED!!!!! BUT SHE SAID THERE WAS NO WAY!!!! AND THEN I WAS RIGHT BUT IDK IF IT’S BETTER OR WORSE THIS WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!…[Read more]

]]> 0 13ef3ddd0347dd352bc454772938b4e7 Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76050/ Wed, 11 Mar 2020 23:50:20 -0400 @vivian-grant

Gotta be honest here: It’s Tony Stark. XD Even tho he has practically no filter, he’s (always) and still is my favorite character.

I’ve heard of Avatar: the Last Airbender probably once in my entire life. XD XD

Who’s your favorite Marvel character? XD

]]> 0 18f2f19ed979ac6b8a0708c0c85e46b2 Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76048/ Wed, 11 Mar 2020 23:20:13 -0400 @vivian-grant

I enjoy a lot of writing and drawing, which isn’t as good as I like to pretend it is. XD

I like hanging out with my friends, reading in a quiet corner, listening to music and dancing.

I’m very much introverted, but am actually way bouncier then I seem at first glance. XD XD

I also very much enjoy watching movies. All kinds, but…[Read more]

]]> 0 6c455fbd4e1aa3b6ddbcbbdd1609157a Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76045/ Wed, 11 Mar 2020 22:55:18 -0400 @vivian-grant

XD XD *Laughing my face off*

Pirates are great. XD XD XD

What kind of things do you like to do?

]]> 0 07b83d3728fe9f3292b8a3bfe0868edb Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76037/ Wed, 11 Mar 2020 19:47:05 -0400 @vivian-grant

Kirat: *hands book to Dagger*

Rhioe: *enters* Oh Kirat, Kenem said you had his dagger. . . *sees Dagger* *squeaks in fright and hurries away*

Me: *stares after her* I really don’t know what’s with my characters today. XD

]]> 0 2c7995890fbe8f945eb1862d081f3000 Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76035/ Wed, 11 Mar 2020 19:35:23 -0400 @vivian-grant

XD It’s fine. XD

Kirat: *has guide to pirate speak propped up in front of him*

Me: I’m worried that all this pirate stuff is going to his head. XD

Kirat: I’m reading!

Me: O.o He never yells at me for that. . . oh boy, . . .

Kenem: Kirat have you seen my dagger? *looks up* *realizes he’s not alone* *disappears*

Kirat: *pulls…[Read more]

]]> 0 9c9978e4193f49436918c13c121f4336 Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76032/ Wed, 11 Mar 2020 19:21:37 -0400 @vivian-grant

That’s funny, XD a lot of people on here have asked me that. In return, I want to ask why you want to know.

Please don’t be offended by me asking. πŸ™‚

 

]]> 0 4fc8b96211ecc19823f8952f1f4cd152 Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76029/ Wed, 11 Mar 2020 19:02:46 -0400 @vivian-grant

*tries to think of snappy response*

*fails*

*goes to hide in a corner with no one but a cat*

Kirat: I wanna know more about the guy who came to rescue the witch!

Rhioe: I want to know if Owl ever finds his amber haired girl.

Jin: I actually want to know about Eleor, what happened to him?

Kenem: I think it needs more…[Read more]

]]> 0 c770322134e30fd91626c4a4de9c3ebc Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76015/ Wed, 11 Mar 2020 13:49:26 -0400 @vivian-grant

*blinks*

I think I’m going to have a literal meltdown in front of my entire family. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEEEE?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?! WHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYY?!?!?!!

*takes deep breath*

*still hasn’t forgiven you*

*has internal turmoil on congratulating you or yelling at you some more*

]]> 0 3269ff44aac2e46708a6b0b2daed39f8 Urwen Starial replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76012/ Wed, 11 Mar 2020 13:33:56 -0400 @vivian-grant

Now you’ve got my attention! I wanna know what happens next!!!!!!

]]> 0 24368950268cf1cdaad22405f89e4d66 Esther Sears replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/75915/ Tue, 10 Mar 2020 15:39:07 -0400 @vivian-grant It already sounds super cool!! πŸ˜€ I’m excited to read it!

]]> 0 ead80ac3651171c498521803c95d298d Esther Sears replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/75832/ Mon, 09 Mar 2020 02:45:31 -0400 @vivian-grant Those are sooooo helpful, I appreciate it so much!!

I’d love to read your story! What’s it about?

]]> 0 12cd79bea9c7048fe54bed3196847b9d Esther Sears replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/75648/ Sat, 07 Mar 2020 02:55:39 -0400 @vivian-grant Thank you sooo much!! It means so much to hear you say that ^_^ I’m glad to hear you didn’t know what was going to happen right away πŸ™‚

Yes, you are pronouncing Bjorn correctly πŸ˜‰

That’s a very good point about the ships! Thanks πŸ™‚

Would you mind commenting on the grammer mistakes in the document? I definitely want to get those…[Read more]

]]> 0 9cbc0672969b5f464fcc3f0b56462bfc Esther Sears replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/75589/ Fri, 06 Mar 2020 19:25:02 -0400 @vivian-grant If you can pay special attention to setting, and the girl character (Moira), that would be super helpful!! Although anything you notice and can give me feedback on is great πŸ™‚

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