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  • The Fledgling Artist started the topic DESPERATE 4 CRITIQUE in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago

    Hello writer friends. It is I, the fledgling artist, AKA the wannabe-writer. I have next to no writing experience and have written next to no things. Literally. So.. This is me, mustering up every ounce of discipline and bravery I have. I wrote a (short) thing, and I’m asking for critique. I need to know some things, guys.

    1. How bad am I actually?

    2. Am I doing anything right whatsoever?

    3. How do better?

    4. What is my most glaring weakness (and how do fix)

    … Um, I think that’s it. I want you guys to be completely honest with me. I don’t want to be torn apart here, but that’s probably what I need.

     

    I should tag people, I guess.

    *tagging*

    @daeus-lamb @evelyn @I-david @Kari-Karast @Gabrielle Pollack  @Taylor Clogston @theinconceivable1 @any-one-who-can-spare-the-time @I-need-need-help-guys

    *scared*

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