Story_Guardian

Eliana turned her head to see what he was doing. “Hm.”

@caladris

XD I was in a bored spell when I began reading the character castle. As for Khalon’s backstory, well it is woefully underdeveloped. All I know is that it’s not tragic, all of his family is alive, he’s an only child, and his parents are great. I might change some of those though.

@denali-christianson

Here goes!

KHALON

A girl walke…[Read more]

Liorah

“I’m a doctor,” Niarok said quietly. “I didn’t mean to stare. I’m sorry. Although if you ever want to tell me how you got them, I’d be happy to hear the story.”

It wasn’t what I’d expected him to say. He was literally the first person in this entire place who had decent manners.

I shrugged and grinned, easily.

“There’s not much to tel…[Read more]

@calidris

I second this: Acyn is one of your best characters and there is nothing anyone can say to convince me otherwise!  He’s genuinely annoying but in the most oblivious, hilarious way and I love him for it lol

I’m so glad you like him too! 😀 My biggest issue for him is that I don’t have anything for him to do in the later books! He ju…[Read more]

@denali-christianson yep, and it’s always the same character, too.  You know how there’s that one character that you feel sorry for, and you have to give them trauma and you just feel so sad seeing them all hurt and alone?  But then it’s all the more satisfying to heal them and watch as they grow and develop and finally reach their happy e…[Read more]

@calidris

Ok, semi-weird question, but have you ever cried over your story?

Too many times to count. I usually have a crying spell every time a character dies or comes back to life or has a friendship or gets injured or moves. Or breathes. Breathing especially. And this makes me realize that I have forgotten once again that Yila has asthma. Excuse…[Read more]

@denali-christianson ahh yes

Ok, semi-weird question, but have you ever cried over your story?

@calidris

sooo basically tears?

Precisely. The really watery kind that flood houses, oftentimes accompanied by blood. And villains.

@denalichristianson sooo basically tears?

@calidris

@denalichristianson you know, I never realized it, but that’s another common feature in this castle –  literally just about everyone in here either fits into the category of assassin, warrior/soldier, or both lol

A bunch of walking war machines with childhood trauma.  Welcome to Character Castle 2.0

Truer words have never been spoke…[Read more]

@denalichristianson you know, I never realized it, but that’s another common feature in this castle –  literally just about everyone in here either fits into the category of assassin, warrior/soldier, or both lol

A bunch of walking war machines with childhood trauma.  Welcome to Character Castle 2.0 😀

@rose-colored-fancy I second this: Acyn is one of your best characters and there is nothing anyone can say to convince me otherwise!  He’s genuinely annoying but in the most oblivious, hilarious way and I love him for it lol

Also, Basil was isolated in a lab for all of his life.  Skia was stuck in a lab too but at least she had other subjects t…[Read more]

@inkhorn

I’M LAUGHING SOOOO HARD RIGHT NOW LOL

Also I love how Khalon is identifying everyone as “soldier, dangerous, soldier, soldier, don’t get on their bad side… Niarok.” XD Literally everyone in this castle is a walking war machine and then there’s Niarok, who’s also a walking war machine except that he refuses to make war soooo…

Also,…[Read more]

KHALON

Khalon studied the people around him. Asses the situation. Okay so, dramatic girl was dangerous; don’t try to annoy her. Then there was that guy she was giggling at. He also looked dangerous. Maybe it was the mask or maybe it was that song he was singing, either way do not get on his bad side.

Khalon sighed. Two dangerous people in one r…[Read more]

Kallun nodded and slowed his paced to match Pia’s, gently taking hold of her hand.

(hahahahaha)

Eliana gasped, “I’m sure it is. That’s awful!”

(my dad stood behind reading what you said in a dramatic voice then said “what? that makes no sense! Why would she look back at Pia?”)

(then saw me typing that and said to say “my dad stood behind me and laughed at my stupidity” and then continued to speak in that dramatic voice as he walked around…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

if anyone’s character wants to commentate on Lorcan’s daydreaming/humming go ahead  it’s certainly something that i did a lot AND got into trouble for in school so I’m just adding my own quirk to his character.

I can 120% relate to this. 😂😂😂

Yila

Yila’s anger subsided, replaced by the ever-gnawing guilt that slo…[Read more]

Lorcan

As Niarok began a conversation with Liorah (he couldn’t imagine why), he scanned the cavern. His eyes caught on Yila speaking to someone he didn’t recognise. He watched her for a moment as they spoke. Whatever was being said, it was making her rather angry. He wondered what had set her off.

The man walked off, and leaned against a wal…[Read more]

@this-is–not-an-alien

Well, I now know you have seen my texts and email so I will patiently wait for a response…

@inkhorn

Lol this is funnnnn

Yila

“Okay?” the man said uncertainly.

Yila had unnerved him.

Good.

He sighed and threw up his hands in surrender. “I won’t hurt anyone unless it’s absolutely necessary. Besides, I’m unarmed.”

He was clearly trying to make his voice sound friendly.

Yila almost felt patronized. Almost.

But the one shred o…[Read more]