Steward of the Pen

YOUR GUILDMASTER HAS RETURNED! And shall do all of these crazy adjustments that were decided on while I was away. xD Please bare with me as i frantically email and update things today.

Thanks for being nice to my cousin while I was gone. And thanks @Jane-Maree for stepping in for…[Read more]

@esjohnson Thanks!! 🙂

@steward-of-the-pen Yay! I got you to be poetical! 😉

Thanks for pointing that out and I definitely fix it. Thanks! 🙂

@Wonderland7
@emily-d
@rebecca-w
@Writerforever
@writercatherine
@thewanderingtypewriter

Welcome to the Parimi team! It’s a pleasure to have you joining.

All Parimis: Yes, we’ve got some MORE guild members, but don’t worry! There’s a couple other developments coming up in a day or two  (because it feels weird for me to make important…[Read more]

@Evelyn
@steward-of-the-pen
@cassie-hartfinh

I think the topic should be working for you guys now.

@evelyn The topic should be back up and running, I think. I’ve unspammed it and republished it again for you. 😉

(@steward-of-the-pen @cassie-hartfinh you two should be able to access it again)

Defenestration – My Most Recent Short Story

@steward-of-the-pen  –  You’re welcome! I always like when people put up interesting and unique topics here. Glad I was able to help.

@steward-of-the-pen Yes. 😛

I tried three times. Apparently it got put in spam, but @jane-maree said she could fix it… for whatever reason, I’m able to get there. Not sure why you are not. 🙁

FORUMS! 😛

xD

*flies in on an armored dragon, lands with an epic cape swish, and trips on a rock* Ow. Anyway, I’m here.

On to the matter at hand! I agree with everyone about the mood and description at the beginning. It’s VERY good. I might just take some tips from that. 😉

Alpha Yeath seems slightly…eccentric, for lack of a better word. But I think it…[Read more]

Yay! It worked… finally. 😛

Anyways…

@steward-of-the-pen  @cassie-hartfinh  @j-a-penrose

Please let me know what you think! 🙂

( @esjohnson @steward-of-the-pen  @ariella-newheart  ‘Cause it didn’t work up there. 😛 )

@steward-of-the-pen

I think you just gave me an idea. Correct me if I’m wrong but the nature of the dragons as to whether they’re biological/magical/mechanical was left unstated right? And you’re thinking of a story where people viewed tech as some spooky stuff right? What if the dragons were the old tech? Here’s my pitch:

There was once a…[Read more]

@steward-of-the-pen 🙁 I’m so sorry. That’s hard.

@steward-of-the-pen Whooo that’s great! I’m glad this helped you. 😀 (I put so much work into this, haha. xD)

@steward-of-the-pen give me more give me more give me more

PLEASE I LOVE IT

@steward-of-the-pen As the insufficient substitute for you awesome guildmaster, I thought I’d drop in here to have a look. And can I just say, I LOVE the beginning! The way you set the tone and emotion of the story using the weather and setting to build up the tension of the story before it’s even really started. Excellent job. 😀

@steward-of-the-pen NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You evil author. 😉

@steward-of-the-pen *geeks out* YES! I want more!!! XD

Also, I really like the personification of the moon and stars at the beginning to set the mood… but most of all…

Gimme more! 😉

Good job!