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  • Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Guild War : A Happy Ending…Minus the Cliché in the forum Announcements 7 years, 4 months ago

    @cassie-hartfinh @ariella-newheart @anne_the_noob14

    Aw, glad you like it. xD I’m happy to whip up first draft if everyone is good with this idea. Do you guys want to throw out some suggestions? The part of the story I don’t have worked out in my mind is the middle where the horse is trying to prevent the prince from rescuing the princess. Any ideas for what he could attempt (and fail) for foiling the prince’s plans? I’m planning on giving the horse a sort of mini character arc where he overcomes his jealousy, so ultimately that would play into his decisions.

    Also, what sort of event do you think would cause him to realize he’s being selfish so that he decides as long as the prince is happy, he can be content? Maybe something the prince says to him that makes him realize his jealousy that is ruining their friendship?

    @j-a-penrose Am I good to go ahead with this? Just want to make sure you don’t have any objections before I start doing any detailed brainstorming.

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