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@this-is-not-an-alien

I wasn’t referring to the depression, impressively enough (score one for recovery right?). Or the violence.

I am self-aware of the fact that I swear and I do remember you asked me not to.

🫥

“Hey. Can I join you?”

Was that a joke? Nobody had ever actually joined him in a mad quest for brutal vengeance…that might be fun.

Of course he got stuck with the blind guy who talks a lot. Pft, at least he didn’t get Sherlock.

“Also. Can someone tell me where I am? And where my…uh…staff is?

“And my foot’s bleeding. Again. Or still. Because of…[Read more]

Did I black out?

Did I … finally finish falling through another hole in reality?

Well.

That’s … interesting.

I’ll just not dwell on that.

At all.

“Fine, can I start with killing you?”

“Hey. Can I join you?” Because honestly, the monster in charge of literal holes in reality needs to die.

Or at least get punched in the face.

I c…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

*hands Ehud a box of napkins*

Idk…probably??

Poor kid.

@calidris

yeah, Basil’s interesting to me because his concept is dark and kind of disturbing, but he isn’t self aware enough to realize it XD  He certainly lacks awareness, but even if someone were to point it out to him he couldn’t care less.  I think that’s on…

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Here’s a painting of Basil!

He has a soft red turtleneck Eli knitted for him – it’s his favorite sweater in all the world and he wears it all the time.  He’s probably wearing it in the castle, since I’m guessing he just got sucked in from home XD

@inkhorn yeah, Basil’s interesting to me because his concept is dark and kind of disturbing, but he isn’t self aware enough to realize it XD  He certainly lacks awareness, but even if someone were to point it out to him he couldn’t care less.  I think that’s one reason why his interactions are so funny to me – he doesn’t know he’s rude/socially a…[Read more]

@inkhorn

I…don’t actually know. He probably told them/got caught and admitted to it at some point because his brother and his best friend are still trying to get him the help he needs for that. But did he actually tell anybody about the ring

*turns over to Ehud: Yo! Did you ever tell anybody about the ring

Ehud: sobs louder.

Me: It’s ok baby…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Oh no…poor Ehud! Has he told anyone that he took the ring? Or is he keeping it to himself?

Ok! Deepest regret…

*Me: sorry Ehud*

*Me; EHUD WON’T TALK TO ME HE WON’T STOP SOBBING I’M SORRY MY BABYYYY 😭😭😭😭😭*

Content warning: Toxic family, violence, cussing (*** out but…) oh and mention of drugs

Ehud was in shock, or he would’ve been screaming at Lord Castle. But he was completely in shock. Ku…

And then one after another ove…[Read more]

@ethan-leonard

I’m going to have to side with what @lady-grace said. Enydd would hate me forever if I let her die in here. XD

ENYDD: You were actually considering it! And after I’ve been so cooperative too!

ME: Irrelevant.

ENYDD: Irrelevant?! I swear that I-

ME: And into the book you go!

@calidris

That post was hilarious! (also rather sad…[Read more]

@lady-grace hehe thanks!

Alright, here’s Basil’s formal re-introduction to the castle!  For those of you who knew him before, he’s changed a bit and really developed (but don’t worry he’s still a socially awkward brat XD)

Basil:

– Tall, (6’3″), super pale white skin, thick black curls.  He’s got a very uncanny, almost disproportionate frame – you’d notice it and feel <…[Read more]

@ethan-leonard

I don’t have much say here since I’m not pulling a character right now, but my opinion is no. Even the castle isn’t allowed to kill people 🤷‍♀️

@calidris

That was both sad and funny. Good job👏

Reintroducing an old character!

Content warnings: there’s some lab scenes – nothing super graphic, but my poor boi is basically a living experiment so take that as you will 🙁

Kit:

“Subject 1711 – divulge your deepest regrets.”

“No.”

I turn to my right to see a tall figure fiddling with his restraints.  Pitch black curls bounce around his…[Read more]

I have a question for those pulling characters out of the castle.

Do you mind if I have Saevus kill them on his rampage he’s about to go on?

Also, I’m gonna drop in Saevus’s top general, General Durun Sollers, right after the rampage of Saevus.

It’s ok, he wasn’t offended, this wasn’t the first time he died.

Nathair awoke in another room much like the room for the first mirror, not a drop of blood on him, and that was a first. Well, it wasn’t a first it was just very rare. Especially when he blacked out.

Dying was awkward, dying was never not awkward. It required a lot more explana…[Read more]

@everyone

I’m going to pull Enydd out. She’s grown a lot here, and I don’t think I’ll uncover more about here. (Not to mention that she’d probably have a nervous breakdown at the beginning of the fight. XD)

@calidris

I feel for this new character of yours. XD

Your Character: Where exactly am-

Castle: Deepest regret! Go!

@jared-williams

I’ve done mine🙂

Is Lorcan still in the castle? I forget who is writer is…

Thanks a bunch for the advice! It really helped me to know that other writers have worked through the same problem I’m having! (And that it worked for you when you shifted the perspectives of your MC) Payton is the first get-under-your-skin, can-be-kind-of-annoying-at-times character that I’ve written – I think that’s why I like him XD He does get…[Read more]

*Peeks up from coffee* Oh, right! Yeah I’ll get Ehud, I think he’s the last one! XDD