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I love this allegory and the conversational style of this poem!! Really nicely done. 🙂 I hope to see more poems from you sometime!

I can’t even begin to put words to how proud of y’all I am. You are moving mountains!

Wow. This is gut-level honesty and it’s awesome. I love the setting and the truth you’ve packed into this poem! Nicely done!

Awwww! Thank you so much for taking the time to read, Libby!! I’m so glad that it spoke to you. <3 That part with Moses' sandals was one of my favorite parts to write!

Wow. I love the vulnerability in this poem, Cindy. I needed to hear this today, too. <3 Thanks so much for sharing!

You are one of my most favorite things!! <3 Thank you so much for reading! 🙂

Awwww! Thank you so much, Ariel!! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. 🙂

I love this so so so so so so so much. Thank you so much for sharing your heart. 🙂

“for the artful weapon of listening

is there for all to wield.”

I have never thought about listening this way, but wow–you just blew my mind, girl! Love this poem and you so much!! Thanks for sharing your heart-words with us. 😉

Your comment made my whole morning, Katherine!! 🙂 I am so glad that you liked it and that you took the time to read it!!

🙂 🙂 🙂 Thanks so much, Brooke!! You were definitely one of my first readers. xD <3

KATE!!!! I’ve missed you so much, my friend! Thank you so much for reading!! <3 🙂

Thanks so much, Martha!!

So, I was reading this and the whole time I was like, “Man, who’s writing could this be? It’s amazing.” And then, of course, I got to the bottom and saw your name and I couldn’t help but grin. You are such a gifted poet, Cindy. Keep doing your thing, girl, and know I am cheering you on. <3 🙂

Wow. First off, thank you for being honest. And then, I love how much hope this has and how much power there is when you surrender your story to Christ. Keep writing, girl. You’ll move mountains. 🙂

*sneakily dumps lots of love* *less sneakily throws lots of confetti* Love this and you, you amazing human you.

*hugs* I am so glad, Heather! Thank you so much for taking the time to read it, and know that I’m cheering you on through whatever you’re walking through! <3

Thank you so much, Libby!! I’m so thankful for you taking the time to read my poem! <3 🙂

Hey there, Sereena! Thank you for reading it! I’m so glad that it was helpful. Cheering you on! <3 🙂

You grabbed me from the title!! I love metaphors, and this one is no exception!! Well done, you poet you! Keep up the great work. 🙂