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Sarah Inkdragon started the topic Need Alpha Readers! in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
Hello everyone! Today I need some Alpha readers for my up and coming blog serial story/novella. I’d like to get as many people as I can, so if you’re free to read over some chapters, offer some critique, and tell me what you think of the story overall for a few weeks, that would be great. I’m planning on this story being around 15 chapters, with the first two already written and the third coming soon.I’ll be updating this thread every day I have a new chapter out, tagging my alpha readers so they know the next part is up.
So, if anyone would like to read, that would be awesome. One thing I must note is that this story has a curse in it, and some action, but nothing graphic. There are also magic. So if you don’t like magic, this story really isn’t for you. It’s nothing strange, just stuff like fairies and etc. Almost like if Howl’s Moving Castle met Narnia. Also, a character gets whipped. Like–whipped as in chained to a post and flogged. Nothing graphic, he screams, there’s some pain, but I’m not describing what every single lash does to his back and how much blood there is, etc. The whipping is meant to be a punishment, not a death sentence. XD
Anyhow, here’s the link. Check it out, comment, and tag anyone who you think might be interested in reading. I’d like to get at least ten people on board.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16DWrPhWJcwlrG3d780DKufeZ8tAzh4qc3gO8w_4bKFg/edit?usp=sharing
If that link doesn’t work, tell me and I’ll fix it. 😉
@morreafirebird @elizabeth @warrenluther04 @ethryndal @allison-grace @r-m-archer @kate @anyone-else…












