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Rose replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? š in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
Yes, the water does contrast (Iām using my contrasting backwards XD) The well is actually shown in the picture prompt, and the water is this rich turquoise, so it stood out. What IĀ couldĀ do is to perhaps use the fresh water to lead to thoughts longing for his once beautiful world . . .
That’s a brilliant idea! *Hurriedly looks up picture prompt* Wow, your description was flawless! That looks exactly like I imagined it!
Yes, bad habit of mine
LOL, same! I either describe nothing or describe everything four times XD
Good idea; I always did hate stories that left me with no clear idea of what might happen afterwards! Thanks so much!
You’re totally welcome! I can’t wait to see it in its proper place as the winner! š You did awesomely and I’m glad I got to read it! It had me thinking about it for hours afterward.
And how are you? Iāve been great ā just been up to ālife,ā lol. Iāve started my Physics class, and Iām taking piano. My writingās been off and on, but I plan on entering each of these little contests to hone my skills (of which I donāt have very many XD).
That’s awesome!
Physics buddies! *High fives* My books should arrive tomorrow, and then I have to suffer through that for the next year. I have biology and physics as my exam subjects this year. (whY did I choose so many sciences? I hate science! XD Oh, wait. The alternative was geography and economy. Blech.)
That’s so cool, piano is a lovely instrument! Don’t you play guitar too?
Oh, I can’t wait to read your fabulous stories! Please do post them on here if you feel like it, I love reading them!
Howās your fantasy series been coming along? Is Liorah still into trouble (nevermind, I know the answer to thatĀ Ā )?
OOh, I can barely keep hold of the little brat XD *Whacks Liorah over the head with both manuscripts.* Stop! Picking! Fights! With! Everyone!
I finished the first draft of the second book a few weeks ago! It ended up being 120k long, which was longer than I’d thought but I’m really proud of it! And now I’m going back to rewriting book 1!
And I’m kicking the ideas for that Edwardian standalone into a corner because it won’t leave me alone but I can’t start writing it now XD
And yours? Are you still working on Dancrow and Kiark’s manuscripts?
Besides that, (home)school started this week, so my time has suddenly diminished XD I’ve been drawing a lot over the vacation, otherwise just life as usual š












