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  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago

    @wingiby-iggiby

    *GASP* That is BRILLIANT!!! I can’t wait to see how everyone reacts to this!! Great development idea.

    And Rose, that is such a great idea!!!! I love the castles drawl, ha ha This trap will totally stretch my brain . . . (and its totally fine that you moved our characters a bit. Otherwise, we’d probably get to this trap in about a couple decades)

    Thank y’all so much! I got the basic idea from… somewhere? I don’t remember, but I read the basic idea somewhere and expanded on it. I think it may be a lot of fun. *Evil chuckle*

     I tend to criticize every movie I watch now, LOL (making my sister wonder why I can’t just enjoy them) My dad is the type of guy who has a page of knowledge for just about everything, so when we’re watching a movie, he’ll point something out like: “that type of bolt would never come out of the sled like that. They are made just so that won’t happen!” Totally ruining the high action scene, XD

    LOL! I’m usually the person who points out stuff like that, annoying everyone around me. XD The one exception is those tense scenes where they’re slowly making a money transfer for some shady reason and the bar is s-l-o-w-l-y filling up. That annoys my dad XD “Why is it just ticking over so slowly? Do they think there’s a little dwarf that’s flicking the coins from one account to the other?” Apparently, money transfers are pretty instantaneous XD Also, when in movies they hack into a government file within seconds. In the middle of nowhere. With no internet. Those annoy me too XD

    Totally! And ha ha, I totally get it   I’m homeschooled too! Don’t you just love doing math in your PJ’s?

    XD

    Ha ha; patience is one thing I’m still working on, LOL I just started a month ago or so, so I know a max of 4 chords! Yay! I’m a genius! (hear the sarcasm?) And its an acoustic (I love the sound   )

    It’s so awesome that you play the guitar! It’s such a cool instrument!

    Then, a voice like a hoarse robot reverberated off of the dark walls. It sounded like it came from both inside me and out; it bounced around in my soul like a rubber ball inside a room; it thundered in my chest. The voice seemed to come right out of my radio as well, and I nearly dropped it from my shaky hands. As the voice continued to grow and fade in my ears, I jerked out my revolver and pointed it at the door, my hands continuing to tremble.

    That was such an awesome description!

     By what he sounded like next, he must have been faking the creepy voice. I knew it. I was very offended by his drawl. It sounded like he was mocking me; the kids in Fancho laughed outright at my country accent.  Now this.

    I LOVE how he just naturally assumes the castle is attacking him personally XD It suits his personality so well!

    @joelle-stone

    Ha ha, thank you!! I kept trying to make it not cheesy, and while I wish it had turned out better, you made me think maybe it wasn’t that bad.   Thank you!!

    You did it amazingly and it isn’t cheesy at all!

    *looks up song* WOW. That describes Riure PERFECTLY. Thx for sharing that with me!!!

    You’re welcome, I’m glad I guessed correctly 😉

    You do that too?! I love doing stuff like that. I also have recently gotten into writing stories from songs (look up Gollum’s Song by Emiliana Torrini; saddest song IN THE WORLD).

    That sounds like it could be such an awesome writing exercise! I usually have songs for relationships, scenarios, and characters. Liorah has like… *Checks list* 13 songs. Wow. I didn’t realize she had so many! Gav has only three.

     

     

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