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Yes! I do the same thing; it use way too many commas, though I don’t know why, lol.

Yeah! Good idea, and definitely tag me when you do.  And yes, there are other words for love, but in this case (and so many others) the actual word love is really the only one that fits, you’re completely right.

Ha ha!  I actually have The Penderwicks on my shelf, though I haven’t read it… I will get to that 😛

Lol, yes, I completely get what you mean.  For The Point of Travores, do you have everything planned out, or some things a bit vague?  And yes, there’s a point for me when world-building just gets frustrating.  I think I get too into making realistic or perfect, or something, bc it usually ends in some frustration 😛

Aw, thank you!!  It was my first story I’ve ever attempted, so looking back on it (Even though it really wasn’t that long ago :P) I see so many things that make me shake my head.  I actually had this whole quest thing-y planned, where Evlarin would meet people from all the tribes (Remember them? 😛 The Forestians, (Or however I spelled,  I can’t remember.  Haha, as you can tell, I’m horrible at spelling) the Fireanians, the Water Elves, then of course, the Humans). I had this thing planned where they would have to sail across the ocean to another continent, blah blah, and meet the leader for that country, who would tell them about the ancient prophecy predicting the rise of the Shadow Wolves, and how 4 people from each tribe would be chosen to be the Wielders of the Stones of Katir’kar  (They were supposedly powerful objects, and there 4 for each tribe) to defeat the Shadows.  So they were suppose to go on this epic quest, blah blah.  They were gonna have to face these trials or something, before they could take their stones that were kinda gonna be like the worse fear thing we’re doing on Character Castle 2.0.  Long story short, they were going to take ’em home to defeat the Shadow Wolves and their Shadow King, but my Water Elf character had sacrificed himself on the way, so they had to find another Water Elf of his same family tree.  So guess what?  Remember Sahina?  They got her to be the Water Elf Wielder of Water Elf stone.  ‘Cause she was actually his sister (gasp, plot twist ! :P)  But at the end, ’cause my Water Elf character had been turned into a Shadow Wolf, he was transformed back, blah blah.  Looking back on it, it makes me smile.

Two and a half pages is a decent amount of writing!  Before I started writing, I thought that didn’t sound too bad, but now that I do, I’ve learned how much work goes into something like that.  It’s harder than I thought it would be 😛

And yeah, no problem!  I’m very happy I spent my time that way 😛 And lol, yes, you are quite angelic 😛