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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
@mamaauthoress YOU’RE BACK!!!!
Of course I remember you! Seriously though, I’ve been wondering if you’re ok, and how you’re doing. It’s great to see you again! And I totally get it, I’ve had to take long absences as well.
And how could I ever forget my boi Ruan and his flaming hair?
If you ever want to join a castle again, there’s a ne…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Hi Laura! Of course I remember you and Rúan! I’ve been wondering if you’re okay, it’s so nice to hear from you!
Absolutely don’t worry about it, most people on here have hit the same issue (me included) I had to pull out of all the castles because of school 😅 Anyway, it’s totally okay, it’s lovely to hear from you again!
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
Hello all!
If there is room, I’d like to drop in two of my characters.Finnegan Bruinsdale (usually called Finn for short)
White-blond hair, blue eyes, 16 years old, and about 5’ 9”.
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
@everyone I think I’m finally ready for a return!
@merieshenanigans @mamaauthoress I think it’s lees chaotic in here by now, so I’m going to be focusing on my characters in here! Feel free to drop in some of yours too!
Unfortunately, I’m giving Basil and Saskia a break and a long nap (in other words, I’m taking Basil out of the Castle before…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
I’m going to try to revive the castle! I missed it!
Athena
Those idiots were just standing around and not doing anything. Did they want to die? If they did, I wished they’d do it where it wouldn’t be such a mess.
The white-haired man was supporting the red-haired man, t…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
Mr.Trip Williams wrote:
That was awesome… as long as I attacked after I warned them, then it would be within character, I think. He assumes they are under the command of an evil emperor, so if they didn’t take to his warning and approached with raised weapons, he’d attack.
I’m glad! This ought to be interesting!Mr.Trip Willi…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
I’m glad! This ought to be interesting!
They were in the castle before I was, so I don’t know. But I’ll give you the lowdown of all the characters, and the authors can help clarify/correct what I say as they choose
<span style=”text-decoration: underline;”>Currently Active Characters:</span>
Isella–my own; you know…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 6 months ago
*blinks* I need to figure out how to word things better
You’re not alone in that sentiment. I find myself butchering sentences quite often. xD
An intriguing world. I might check out sometime, but I should warn you, my…how should I say it, beliefs about supernatural content are rather…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 6 months ago
Thank you so much,
and
It’s super challenging getting into the head of this antagonist, because he’s being forced into villainy against his will… Perhaps too subtle, but if you noticed, on top of still being attached to his former student, whenever he thinks about not killing, trying to save, or finding some…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 6 months ago
(Author’s Note: she’s autistic, so I’ve been practicing channelling that into her perspective — not sure if that was too glaringly obvious
I wouldn’t have guessed that precisely, but I sensed something, so I think you’re handling it pretty well.
Wow, yup. You got it. 👏 That’s him in a nutshell.
Success! 🙂
My WIP is … okay. I have…
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 6 months ago
A very interesting antagonist! He is obviously very torn about having to sacrifice the things he cares for to get the things he desire to carry out his plan. Do you have a short synopsis I could read of your WIP’s world?
You did a great job showing Coryn’s mental and heart twisting pain. I could feel it, and it…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 6 months ago
Looks like Noah got to it first, but I just had to say – I Love your characters! Awesome job!
Aww, thank you! I really appreciate that!
Your antagonist is fascinating! Let me see what I can figure out.
He’s planning to kill someone who used to be an apprentice of his. However, I think he’s still somewhat attached, as evidenced b…[Read more]
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Merie replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
Ooh, I see! I’ll just edit it so he killed the snake then. Or it just puffed into smoke.
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Noah Cochran started the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 6 months ago
Excellent character voice is extremely hard to pull off, and so like I do with all hard things in life, I decided to make a game out of it.
It’s a joke.
I’m kidding.
Mostly. 😉
Anyways, to the point. Character voice makes everything from dialogue to normal scenery descriptions pop off the page, but, for me at least, it is a very difficult…[Read more]
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Merie replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
Hahaha, he carries knives around with him for a reason. Dealing with venomous snakes actually happens to be his forte xD (Never mind all the times he’s been bitten in order to learn…)
That sounds like a really interesting take on the “empathy” ability!
<b>ERIK</b>
The decapitated snake twitched, making him jump…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
Tullian
His eyes were adjusting to the light. There were long black slithering things on the floor. Snakes!
So that’s source of the fear.
Just to his left one of the people that had come in with Tullian shrieked. Tullian winced. It wasn’t fear. It was terror. And pain–a snake had latched onto his leg. Tullian tried to slow his breathing. In.…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
Literally throwing my characters into the room. 😁
Isn’t it fun?! One of the joys of being an author…*smiles contentedly*
Then his face contorted into a pained, pinched scream.
I looked down, and there was a snake with its jaws clamped around his ankle.
Wow, Ruan hasn’t been in the castle for a minute, and he’s already been…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
*smiles sheepishly* Maybe I should have waited a couple more minutes before releasing the snakes. *embarrassed laugh* xD
And the quota for blatant fourth-wall-breaking has been filled for the week XD Somehow we end up shattering the fourth wall with quite alarming frequency, it’s great XD
XD The fourth w…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
Well, not a whole lot XD
@inkhorn , @merieshenanigans , and me dropped in our characters. They’ve all been hanging around, kinda talking to each other a bit. Merie’s character is off in another room but all the others are together in a library.
The castle just turned off the lights and sent snakes at them. We’re still just…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
I’m going to drop Athena and Ophelia in here for a while! I might not leave them in for long, just because they’re very undeveloped, it can go any direction from here.
Ooohhh, I love that picture of Rúan!
Okay, here are the profiles! (They’re kinda incomplete, as I said, I know next to nothing about them…[Read more]
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