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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
hello everyone
I would like to reenter the castle with some new charries, if that’s all right. (:
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Handmaiden's profile was updated 3 years, 11 months ago
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
Interesting…the character I ennd up writing the most in the castle is very much an extrovert XD
Well, when you and Ruan feel up for it, you’re more than welcome to rejoin!
haha we gotta love the extrovert characters XD
thank you! <3
I’d say that the overall tone of the castle isn’t dark, but there’s definitely been some heavy, touchy subjects…
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
AHW HI CALIDRIS!!! :] That’s just so sweet you guys were wondering about me 🥹
Ahwww Basilllll … that makes me so happy for himmm. ☺️ And I’ll definitely think about it! It’s been a while since I’ve written Rúan (my guess is that he got worn out from me writing him all the time and needed a break because he really is an introvert),…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
Ahw, hey Rose, it’s so nice to hear from you again. (:
And I’m so glad you remembered me and ma boi Rúan. It’s been a while, haha.
and yeah, I’ll likely be spending less time here because of academics, but I’ll be around (:
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
Hello all.
I have disappeared for a while now.
Please pardon my length absence. Life has hit hard, and academics are taking most of my writing time away. I gathered the strength (and courage) to come here again because my boyfriend suggested I check in with you all (he’s also a writer but I don’t think he’s on here).
So please. Accept my…[Read more]
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Handmaiden's profile was updated 4 years, 4 months ago
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
I like your characters. I thought I’d written up a response last night about it, but now I see it’s gone (sad face.) And I don’t remember what I wrote…
Oh well… here’s second impressions. =)
Oof, I feel that. Oh well, it happens sometimes. 😅
My first thought was there something about Coryn that makes her an oddity? I had a feeli…
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
I wouldn’t have guessed that precisely, but I sensed something, so I think you’re handling it pretty well.
Yeah, I figured you wouldn’t. What I meant was: I wasn’t sure if it was glaringly obvious that I was practicing channelling that. 😂
*blinks* I need to figure out how to word things better. 😅
I feel ya. I’m currently in a perio…
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
You did a great job showing Coryn’s mental and heart twisting pain. I could feel it, and it definitely felt very unique in that way.
Thanks! I’m glad I did. 😅
(Author’s Note: she’s autistic, so I’ve been practicing channelling that into her perspective — not sure if that was )Osløn is very intriguing. He is driven by need for di…
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
Oooo this is a cool idea! I’ll pick one from a roleplay I’m in, and one from my WIP. (:
Coryn:
Breathe … in, out … in, out …
It’ll be okay …
“N-no … it won’t …” I mumbled, vaguely aware of how hard I was gripping my head.
This isn’t like the labs at home … you’re just in bed, not in any life-threatening danger.
Oh, but how…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
@emily-waldorf actually, Osløn forcibly removed the snake, ! just didn’t make it clear; I apologise. 😅
But then the knife-like pain in my ankle abated.
My mind was still cloudy with the eerie numbness and ache, but it was slightly better.
It was here ^^
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
OSLØN:
Someone approached. Someone unknown.
This young man had brown hair — a rather common colour, in my opinion — and wore a mysterious expression on his face.
He reached for Rúan’s hand, pulling him up into a standing position. My half-brother’s eyes fluttered.
“Who are you?” I demanded of the new person.
Then Rúan winced, his kn…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Isn’t it fun?! One of the joys of being an author…*smiles contentedly*
Ah yess … the joys of being an overlor– er, uh … author 😁
Wow, Ruan hasn’t been in the castle for a minute, and he’s already been bitten by a venomous snake. This is clearly not his day. Poor guy. xD
Yeahhh, he’s not exactly the luckiest guy. I mean, look who he…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Okay, so I’m going to try something I’ve never tried before:
Literally throwing my characters into the room. 😁
I always try to do something subtle and seamless when introducing my characters, but NO MORE *swipes arm around*
*knocks over the table lamp*
*is unaware of the fire that started*
😐
As evidenced, I am strange.
Very…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Oh gosh … I’m so sorry — I forgot about this. 😅
What’s happening right now? I can’t really read it all (stupid overwhelming disorder); could I have a summary, please? Thanks!
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Here’s Rúan:

Couldn’t find a drawing I did of him. 😒
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Thank you so much!!
You already know Rúan, but I’ll give a bio for anyone else who doesn’t. (:
NAME: Rúan MacAodhàn Pyrestone
GENDER: Male
AGE: 20
RACE: Human
HAILS FROM: Mortus Keep, Kindra continent, Dryadal-Tara (born in Vulgen Village, Aquira continent)
CHARACTER TYPE: Protagonist
SKIN: Irish pale
HAIR: Flaming red
EYES: Sea gr…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Is Oslon Ruan’s illegitimate half brother?
Well … yes, pretty much. I don’t really like revealing this anywhere outside of my WIP, since it’s going to be a groundbreaking plot twist in my WIP. But I thought it would be a good dynamic to explain why Rúan hates him 100x more than he did before he found out. 😅
Does each clan have po…
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Our eyes were locked dead on each other, staring through the chaos that ensued around us. It was an unblinking bridge of pure, numb hate.
Histories of bloodshed and violence could not sum up against the antipathy channelled in this single reciprocated glare.
The background noise lowered to a hum, drowned in the ocean of hatred that crashed…[Read more]
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