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https://docs.google.com/document/d/12GYU8Kcy0Iv6D6ZFs2E39JjkKOFFFIPC8alipiZfx5s/edit

Here’s Draft 1! Obviously it’s still a long way from being coherent, but I just want to show this to you all and see what you think.

1. Does the setting/background make sense? Have I appeared to stereotype any culture?
2. Is the conflict between the characters clear? Is it deep enough? Are the emotions/motivations working?
3. Do you like the flashback?
4. Needless to say… do you consider this to be a happy ending? Is it cliche? 😛

I’m thinking that for the second draft, I’m going to write a brief summary of the larger story with enough background information, and then write the ending so we can actually format it to be like an ending, if that sounds good to y’all. 🙂

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