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  • Libby replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago

    @dakota This is so full of color and beauty.  Last stanza is very much my favorite. 🙂 Thank you for writing all of these.  I don’t comment on every single one, but they’re so refreshing to read – like prayers to God. 🙂

    I just realized that long ago, I should’ve tagged some of my friends who would really enjoy this.  So here goes: @kb-writer and @h-jones

    I haven’t posted a song for a while, but I wanted to share with you a sort of prayer that has been growing on my heart lately.  Some of you might have read it before, but I’ve made it into a song.  Critique is always welcome. 🙂

    Not My Will, Oh Lord, But Thine

    I want them to know
    But how can I tell them?
    My heart is full
    But my mouth stumbles
    I cannot say what is deepest in my heart.
    Father, help me!
    I am weak,
    Unable,
    Unfit to do the work before me.
    Fill me, Father,
    Show me your words
    That what I say
    Will not be from
    Me
    But from
    You.
    You do not stumble…
    Your will is always done.
    What else can I say?
    You are good,
    Lord.
    Let your will be done.

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