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  • Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago

    Nithel hesitated, pausing. The man was just staring at him. Had Nithel done something wrong? He probably did. Gabrel always found something. Was it how he walked? He hadn’t said anything yet, so it couldn’t be that. Maybe he should’ve given back the greeting

    Then the man nodded to him.

    Why did he do that! Nithel’s chest went on overload. The man had stared at him like approaching was the most unsafe thing he could do, then nodding like they had no qualms? Egad. He looked to his side, brows crouched, and jumped to the side. What was

    He looked at the wall, eyes wide a moment. Then he timidly reached to touch it. It… was like solid water; his reflection visible in it. How was that possible? And it was so dark, how could he see? His chest trembled, and he looked back to the man with the strange squares.

    But his mind returned to the vision again. It was so strange. What was it? How was it made? He pushed on it, hard, seeing how durable it was. But the surface, smoother than the softest wood.

    He shook his head, smiling on the inside in awe. Incredible.

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    @this-is-not-an-alien @rusted-knight @joelle-stone (That ending for Lytt was amazing, by the way.) @beth20

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