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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
I love your fur-children idea, Ragnorak!
Cathy- Voting? Shucks…. *tinks*
I vote Hannah’s! Character development-wise, but the other two would be cool/helpful, as well! 🙃
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
That’s so cool Cathy!!!! I love the upward rain, and the glass people, and that the were-people can only change into creatures from earth, and the first people!!!! (
I love Ents, so very much, and they remind me of them. <3)Thanks for sharing!
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
“You’re not the first person to ever try and reach him.” Alessio muttered.
Leana stared at his eyes a moment more. I hope I’m not the last. Her gaze followed his hand, and her heart tightened when she saw the scars on his wrist. Did he do that to you? Or… did he lead you to do it to yourself?
“He…sees kindness as consent,” Alessio spoke…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Nithel sighed softly, and shut his eyes, thinking as Nathair walked off. He fingered the pendants on his necklace, feeling the flower he’d carved, for Leana… *memories/worries for the future/other thoughts…*
Leana smiled sadly at Alessio and squeezed his arm. *thoughts* “How do you know that?” She pushed to her feet, shutting her eyes in a…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
@hannahrenner – Ooh! That sounds really cool, Hannah!
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Cathy- That sounds interesting!!!
I can’t wait to read about your worlds!
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WORLD CHARACTER CHART TEMPLATE
Name of World: Yabni
Time period: 3523 (Since the beginning)
Landscape:
– In Farran: Woods (but not too many), Ocean (all along the western border), rock quarries (up North), mostly covered in sloping hills/fields (for…[Read more] -
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Leana accepts the cloth from Alessio, with a pasted smile. (It hurts.) “Thank you.” Where’d you get it?
Nathair glanced at the girl and Nithel, and smirked a little.
Nithel caught the smirk, then looked at the pair with a growing tingly feeling inside. *hasn’t been around Leana over a year, almost two* *she’s never been around guys, really,…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Nithel came a step nearer, arm starting to slide off Alessio, knowing he had plenty glass of his own. They all did. But he wanted to check Leana.
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Leana’s chest tightened a bit at Nathair’s rebuke, but she breathed in and out slowly. I’m not sure if it wouldn’t be worth it, getting the supplies. We worked hard for them. But, of course… maybe…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Alessio grasped Nithel’s, and the man’s eyes widened in a bit of shock. But when Alessio leaned against him, arm wrapped tightly over his shoulder, tears again filled Nithel’s eyes. He released Leana and put both arms around Alessio, tears rolling down his cheeks.
Leana pressed her lips together, watching them. She swallowed hard, and pulled in a…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
“Not to sound callous, but is there anything else you wanted?”
Nithel swallowed hard, It’s not callus. It’s protective. *honestly a bit heartened by it* “I don’t know what else I could want…” Softly, his brows furrowing. He glanced down at Leana, and she stared up at him with those beautiful blue eyes. Teary. What if the only way to save Lea…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
“Daddy?” Leana gasped at Nithel’s tone, looking at him in shock.
“You don’t know anything about survival…” Nathair whispered, and thoughts raced behind his eyes.
You don’t know my story. Nithel’s heart pulsed with anger, but at his next thought it turned to pain. But I don’t know yours, either.
“Exactly how much do you ‘want what’s best…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
“Daddy?” Leana gasped, lifting her face and seeing a man kneeling before her. Wrinkles hovered around his eyes, and on his forehead. His golden hair had turned gray around the temples. Scars touched his arms. Are there more beneath your clothes? His muscles were still there, somehow firmer. His eyes… his beautiful eyes were so serious. They’d…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Leana feels his arm tense at her question, before he gave a smile… too sweet… and patted her hand. You’re lying to me.
(With his smile.)But his answer cuts away whatever distrust started to form, she knew many men who put on false smiles… to hide their pain…“Because my parents were very bad and hated me, next question?”
I’m sorry. [Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Leana winced as Nathair stood, and held out her arms to keep him from moving, before pulling them back. “Here.” She stepped forward, wincing as she stepped on glass herself, and took one of his arms gently, avoiding the cuts where she could. She looked at the shards, and felt like her heart was being stung. But she started removing them, carefully…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Leana- Leana’s eyes held pain, but hope. She smiled tiredly at the man, trusting him, for some reason. “I… meant your cuts? I don’t know anything about this place-” This dream.
She looked at the tanks, but struggled to recognize any of their forms within them. It was like they were purposely blurred. Where’s Alessio? <span style=”font-size:…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Leana gasped and gagged as she fell from her strange cage. She’d found the lever, after the water drained away, after she’d given up on escape… but here she was. Hacking on a stone ground. Trembling with cold, from head to foot. I hate water. Actually, she was never really given the chance to love it.
She lifted her eyes, still wheezing and saw…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Ohel’s eyes widened as first one man, then Alessio, darted from the building, like the gods were after them.
“John, take care of Leana and don’t let Ohel out of your sight!”
John? The masked man.
Leana’s eyes widened, looking from the door to John. She scooped up her bag and staff, and took a step toward the door.
Ohel hurried forward and g…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Ohel’s brows lifted, while his forehead crinkled. So… you do know where we are..?
“How… long might the trip be, in that case?” He straightened a bit more, trying to keep his hand away from his dagger, but habit made him long for the feel of it. Several months? A year? More? *honestly isn’t sure if home is worth that* *thoughts* Ohel’s face…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Alessio didn’t say anything a moment, but at least he didn’t sputter… “Right now we’re pooling all our resources into survival in the hopes we’ll find something, or someone, that can provide some direction.”
Ohel brows lifted. *thoughts* He risked a glance toward the man behind the counter. *more thoughts* Ohel bit his tongue, waiting for Ales…[Read more]
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