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  • Kayla Skywriter replied to the topic WIP In Need of Critiques: The Clefs in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago

    @banana-peacock-warrior

    Okay, I finished it. Sorry that it took so long for me to do that, I kept losing this thread.

    As for thoughts I had on the Clefs, I’m not sure. I enjoyed it, but I don’t know how to suggest improvements.

    The biggest thing that stuck out to me was the end. Is the story finished, or did you just stop? I just felt like the ending was a bit sudden. Do with that what you will, I just wanted to let you know that I didn’t forget you.

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