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Okay, thanks for clearing that up. My mind is already twisting and turning to create an antagonist, can’t wait to start.

I rewrote the beginning like you suggested. Is it good now, or should I try again?

Also, I wouldn’t normally ask this, but I’m hoping to fill out a guild application soon. As you likely know, one of the questions is “What aspects of storytelling do you excel at?”. I can find plenty of things that I need help with, but I don’t know if there’s any part I excel at. Now that you’ve read my work do you have any ideas?

Thanks, I did quite a bit of research before writing, and (although this book is not based on him what so ever) by best friend was adopted as a baby. His family (not birth family) also tried to adopt some other little boys over the years that I’ve known them. But, they were all international adoptions, and several things went wrong. So now the little boys are back in the Ukraine and Latvia. It is really sad.