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@myclipboardismyviolin Hi, sorry I didn’t get to you sooner, I was on vacation all week.

No, this story is not based off of anyone I know. It is just something I am passionate about. And, thank you, I try to research well.

You said my story was dark, and I agree with you. Are you saying that is a bad thing? I don’t think you are, but I’m just checking.

I’m aware of the flaws with the way she handles the problems of both her and others. If my story ends up where I want it to she will be very clear of her flaws too.

You say I need a stronger antagonist. Now that I’ve thought it over I agree with you. But, who are you suggesting? Is there an underdeveloped character on the sidelines that could step up, or do I need to write a whole new character?

Thanks for you help.