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JennytheFaun started the topic Concerning a Shortish Story and a Longish Story in the forum Critiques 7 years, 3 months ago
So, a couple months ago I wrote a story that was just going to be “for fun,” but ended up being one of my favorite things I’ve written. It also ended up being rather long for a short story, weighing in at over 9,000 words. I’m not planning on editing it more (unless you guys convince me I should), but I’d appreciate it a lot if you could give me thoughts and tips and advice for the future. https://1drv.ms/w/s!AvW4C3toKDfAgT043imHxEnFc6BY Let me know if that link works or not!
I would also be eternally indebted to anyone willing to read my published book and give me feedback–especially in the form of an honest Amazon review. I know it’s super hard to find time for a whole book, but in my defense this one is more of a novella, really, at under 40k words. You can get it here: https://www.amazon.com/Mercy-Shield-Sword-Light-Book-ebook/dp/B07DK5GXBQ/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1548715117&sr=8-1&keywords=mercy+and+her+shield
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