Mr.Trip Williams

This one I’m pretty proud of… sends shivers….

Female protagonist, in describing the man she’s attracted to after he carries her in from the rain – after drying off, he sits in front of a fire with a blanket rapped around him…

The shadows and lights danced upon his face as a lone drip of water streaked down his face, following the…[Read more]

anyone mapped the castle or gone other places in the castle yet?

Yay!

lol. I kinda felt the same about trying to go back to read pages and pages previous story line to see who the characters were… lol. but… at least for my characters, I posted links… but there are pretty good visuals in the links. Used Hero Forge… it’s free (though it does have paying features -but only if you want it), and it…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

that’s beautiful!

Yay! it did make me nervous…writing someone else’s characters… felt like messing with someone else’s masterpiece… but this is a lot of fun. I needed something like this. I still consider myself a novice when it comes to writing… and this is the first time I’ve really engaged in any form of creative writing activity.

(wow… okay. What in the world? I posted the whole thing in sections and it worked, but when I tried to post the whole thing, it blocked me… what’s up with that?)

“Hey, Conan the barbarian, mind putting on some clothes?” The man in the strange metallic get-up  called from afar. He had been watching me from a distance, but this was the first time hearing his voice.

I looked down at my gaaban. If they were from another world, they probably knew nothing about aygiffs, meaning they knew nothing of gaabans.…[Read more]

Enydd rocked back and forth on her heels. “So, are you an elf? Oh, I’ve always wanted to meet an elf, but I just thought they were fairy tales. Please tell me you’re real, or are your ears just fake?”

“Um…” What are elves? “I… they’re real. I’m an aygiff.”

“An aygiff?” She tilted her head to the side. The blond lady looked just as puzzled, w…[Read more]

(Continued)

Perhaps she was from the desert region, or perhaps the far corners of the Kemet. Trying the formal greeting of the desert, I held my hands at the waist a shoulder-length apart, bent my wrists down, fingers spread, palms up, then brought them up till they were parallel with the top of my shoulders.

“Forgive me.”

She took a few more…[Read more]

I don’t know what it is censoring… so, forgive the annoyance, but I’ll try posting it in sections…

Abirami

Turning around, I stood to find a well-endowed, young, blond faehin standing before me. Her right eyebrow was slightly raised, and her lips were as straight as a whip. Her expression reminded me of Yaxkin’s resting face… the…[Read more]

Somethings wrong. It keeps blocking me when I try to post it… something about WordPress?

Hahaha.

@rose-colored-fancy

your  character’s cynicism is great! I don’t think I’ve ever laughed at dry negativism before. Quite excellently written. lol.

Is it okay to borrow other characters when it comes to conversations? I’m wondering if I should respond, since the scene’s halted with us facing each other…. or wait for others to join in?…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

oh, that’s awesome. Thank you so much! That’s helpful. So… lol. Klein… is his weapon a gun? he coulda shot me out of the sky or shot me before I got close. … eek. lol. oh well, hope what I’ve written works…

@emily-waldorf

That was awesome… as long as I attacked after I warned them, then it would be within character, I think. He assumes they are under the command of an evil emperor, so if they didn’t take to his warning and approached with raised weapons, he’d attack.

What page are Klein and Lorcan’s descriptions… I would love to know who is…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

thank you so much for reading! It’s a complex and delicate subject. Slavery and war are both very controversial topics. The question of guilt or innocence is also a difficult one (ultimately, only the Lord can determine true innocence) and I think this situation blurs the line between innocent and guilty in a stark…[Read more]

Hope that’s acceptable…

I know it might feel like I’m pulling this too far into my world, but I figured Abirami is completely confused as to what’s going on, so he’s going to assume he’s still in his world… hope that’s alright. never done anything like this before. lol.

Oops… didn’t realize should only have one character in at a time… hehe. Let me fix that.

context info

– Dhiaga – title of the evil emperor who killed Abirami’s father and is out to kill him too

– description of the aemirok – in full – About 15 feet tall, distinct wolf-like features and body, but the ears are closer together on top of its…[Read more]