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Catholic Creed

  • “Please don’t.” Crazy Inquisitive Boy piped. “There’s always stairs. Right there.”

    Nathair stared at him blankly. Without Yasha telling him what to do, he was pretty slow reading people and figuring out what people wanted from him. This wasn’t at all helped by the fact that he was sure to be hit whether or not he complied, it was just a matter…[Read more]

  • Sage watched in confusion as Saga jumped out the window. The spider, naturally, was much bigger now. Almost as big as the couch. It was a little… intimidating. Wait, not out the window!

    It… jumped… after the others… Sage decided to look down. Nathair looked down too.

    “
Are you going to jump out the window too
?” Nathair asked Leana,…[Read more]

  • Nathair stared out the window after Alessio. Assumably he could stand safely, he always did.

    As the spider grew, Nathair side-eyed the creature, seemingly immortal. It probably had a weakness of some sort, but the boy had already decided he was doomed to get killed again. So he just watched what everyone else was doing.

    Panicking. They were…[Read more]

  • Ohel has proceeded to open door after door, only stopping when he comes to a room which reminds him of his father’s forbidden one.

    Ohel approached the desk, but stares at the books (if there are any) with stunned fascination, curiosity, and longing. He’ll touch them tenderly, hesitantly, like a mist that will vanish.

    ———

    Nithel is…[Read more]

  • “Uhhmmm
Sorry about that.” The boy who tried to touch his hair was stammering. “I didn’t know
”

    Didn’t
didn’t know?! Nathair tensed more, glancing from him to Alessio as if the boy with the mismatched eyes had telepathy or something. But he was just assuming, wasn’t he? Why should he even care if the weird boy knew anything about him? He didn’t…[Read more]

  • ‘It’s ok’? That’s what he said, but he meant ‘I forgive you.’

    If this was to give him another chance at living
Nathair didn’t know. They had so much more than their differences and Alessio would never be reconciled to who he was after all. So why was it so intoxicatingly safe to hear him?

    You’re scared of me.

    Why didn’t he kill Nathair now th…[Read more]

  • Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    “
why aren’t you with your dad?” Nathair asked, sounding too whiney even for him to stand. “He seems nicer
” He squeezed his eyes shut and tightened his jaw.

    Leana glanced toward him, cocking her head, before glancing at her father, who sat on the floor, looking at a young man. “I think… you need me more, right now.” She whispered, al…[Read more]

  • Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    @ragnarok @sarafini

    😄

    What’s your favourite thing about spring, Sarafini?

     

    @this-is-not-an-alien @hannahrenner

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    “Well, Alessio, that’s your name right? It means you can move away, get a job, and live somewhere without your parents but you can’t make those choices yourself without someone signing off for you. If that makes sense.” ‘Alixer’ was saying.

    He got the wrong name. Nathair watched scrunched in his corner in the room for lack of anything else to do.…[Read more]

  • Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    @hannahrenner
    thank you for noticing😂

    I love all the characters so it is very hard for me to choose favourite😂 but I reckon Riza is up there with Roy, Alphonse, Olivier, Ling and Hughes🥰

    who is your favourite? :))

  • Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    @hannahrenner

    did someone say Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood🥳🤩😍 !!!

    *excited scream*

  • Sarafini replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    @kimlikesart @this-is-not-an-alien @ragnarok @hannahrenner

    Alixer

    “Well, Alessio, that’s your name right? It means you can move away, get a job, and live somewhere without your parents but you can’t make those choices yourself without someone signing off for you. If that makes sense. We are considered adults at 17 and we’re giving complete…[Read more]

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    Nathair slumped in his spot, dully watching the chaos ensue. Out of the corner eye he kind’ve watched Leana, not really sure what she was going to do. He waited a bit for her to
do something, and squirmed.

    Finally, he let out a breath and made something of an attempt to be friendly.

    “
why aren’t you with your dad?” He asked, sounding too whiney…[Read more]

  • Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    @this-is-not-an-alien @hannahrenner @ragnarok @sarafini

    How are you all doing today!
    Do you have any plans for Resurrection Day? 😊

  • Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    “It basically means hero. I’ve been told that it means sacrificer. Why are you guys so afraid of a spider and what is with the kids running around.”

    Nithel’s brows popped up on his forehead, and he glanced toward Leana just a moment, before looking back at Alixer.

    “I’m 16 btw.” Alixer went on. “Not a kid or adult. In fact, at 10 you’re conside…[Read more]

  • Sarafini replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    <p style=”text-align: left;”>@hannahrenner @this-is-not-an-alien, @ragnarok @kimlikesart</p>
    Alixer 

    “It basically means hero. I’ve been told that it means sacrificer. Why are you guys so afraid of a spider and what is with the kids running around. I’m 16 btw. Not a kid or adult. In fact, at 10 you’re considered independent in my country. But…[Read more]

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    “It’s alright
” Nithel attempted.

    “But he-!”

    “Get up!” Ohel yelled, leaving Alessio flushing with fury.

    “I don’t know if I can?”

    “You looked buff enough, back in the other place. Like you could carry my adult-self. So move.” He growled dangling on top of Nithel. (Alessio was kind’ve jealous, he kind’ve wanted a piggyback ride now
) But he w…[Read more]

  • Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    “Get off of him right now,” Alessio threatened, drawing himself to his full
four foot height? “and apologize to Nithel. Now.”

    Nithel chuckled nervously, still struggling not to fall off the couch. “It’s alright…” Not that I’d let my children talk to me this way…

    Ohel snorted, in reply to Alessio, glowering down at Nithel. “Get up!”

    “I d…[Read more]

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    Nithel started when Alessio backed into him, causing Alessio to start too!

    And then someone howls with terror, and boy grasps at the short, thin sword-hilt at his side (As if he’d ever been in a real fight at this point! Of course, he had – in the future – but that
that was just weird and hurt his brain!) It’s just the spider, but Ohel was freak…[Read more]

  • Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    Nathair only seemed angrier, at Leana’s words, and her shoulders slouched.

    “Stupid princess,” he murmured. And… it honestly hurt worse than her hand.

    You don’t… have to remain a snake… Leana pressed her eyes shut, and sucked in a long breath. But do you want to? Really? She’d never considered there were those… who truly wanted to be…[Read more]

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