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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
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Logan looked at Rhioe, his expression went blank for a moment. He hadn’t been expecting the question. She was determined to find out why he had been there. But what would he tell her? He didn’t just drop in to say ‘hi’. What could he say to her? He couldn’t lie to this girl that reminded him so much of Shyla. He…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
(sorry this is such a short piece)
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All the awkwardness suddenly vanished. Logan looked down at Rhioe’s wrapped up foot. “How’s your ankle feel now Rhioe?” he asked.
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
The girl looked desperate for something to say. Finally she said, “who’re you?”
Logan smiled slightly, “Logan Blackmoore. You?”
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Go ahead! ๐
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Okay, that’ll work.
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
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The girl’s laugh relaxed him. She let her hands drop into her lap, “No you’re fine. Itโs just. . . โ her voice trailed off and she looked at him, the concern in her eyes showing again, “you remind me of someone.โ she shook her head, โAre you okay?โ
Logan looked at her a moment, her words ringing in his ears, “you remind me…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Unrealistic Character? in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Yeah. I agree with @abigail-rebekah and @esmeralda-gramilton. It’s good, it’s just that the transition from grumpiness to niceness is too sudden. ๐
It is really good though.
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Yeah. he would come back. ๐ What would you want to happen then? Would you want Jin to come back or no?
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Is that post good?
He might just decide not to go through with the investigation. Maybe now he could take Rhioe to the old lady’s house?
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story Art Thread in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Yeah-LOL I figured that out too!!
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Logan
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Something like a voice started to break through the darkness in Logan’s mind. He couldn’t tell what it said, but it was soft and soothing. He felt a strange coolness on his forehead and gradually the pain faded.
The voice began to clear, he recognized it as the girl’s. The words became understandable. “It’s going…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Here’s the whole backstory
Logan Character Story Backstory: He grew up in Outopia with his abusive uncle.(His uncle workedย for the Rooks. Logan still has many scars from being abused by him) His
parents were both killed in a fire and his little sister (Shyla) disappeared (she was kidnapped
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Shyla is his sister. I put the backstory in the doc. I think I left her name out though. LOL. You can go read it or I can copy it into here.
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story Art Thread in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
They still look awesome!! Luv it!!
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story Art Thread in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Ooh!! Super cool!!
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
I think it was perfect. A little awkward but now alot. The words flow well and it makes sense.
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