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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Short Story Contest Critique in the forum Peer Review 6 years, 10 months ago
@morreafirebird Here’s the newest version… Thank you so much for your help! Please don’t feel like you have to look it over again if you don’t want to… you’ve done a lot already π https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nQYPvy3fsQMsmyzVu9nDXrQGh2IKylfR/view?usp=sharing
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Short Story Contest Critique in the forum Peer Review 6 years, 10 months ago
@morreafirebird Thank you so much again for your feedback! If you don’t mind, here it is again, edited.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mtZTpHXWK3ol3g6pfp6kTIaPf76i5zsr/view?usp=sharing
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic May 2019 Accountability in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 6 years, 10 months ago
-Write five pages every day
-Write the letters
-Don’t break a leg yet break a leg at the same time
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Week 13: Writing Life; Typing vs. Writing (Me) in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
I have written pretty much everything by hand. All my novels, my short stories, all by hand. And then it is such a pain to type it… The only things I don’t hand-write are group projects and Chinese stories.
I feel like at some point I should switch to just typing, but then I get so distracted… Plus, it’s not easy to lug around a laptop with…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Short Story Contest Critique in the forum Peer Review 6 years, 10 months ago
@morreafirebird Thank you so much for your feedback! Yeah, I don’t really have much experience with character arcs, but I’ll try my best to improve the story.
Do you mind if I post an edited version of the story later?
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Linyang Zhang started the topic Short Story Contest Critique in the forum Peer Review 6 years, 10 months ago
Hi everyone! Finally finished my piece for this year’s contest-
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mtZTpHXWK3ol3g6pfp6kTIaPf76i5zsr/view?usp=sharing
Please don’t feel pressured to critique. Uh, for those of you who decide to, I’m looking for comments on everything: plot, characters, spelling, grammar, theme, etc, etc…
It’s not too long, maybe…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic May 2019 Accountability in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 6 years, 11 months ago
@emgc I finally finished part one of my wip this morning! So happy!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Weekly Wonderings in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
Hmm for those of you who say that it’s hard to imagine characters…they say that the human brain cannot make up new faces.
I think that my visualizing is pretty vivid, when you tell me to visualize something, I will. However, my memory tends to warp what people look like, so that I have difficulty remembering their actual face.
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Linyang Zhang posted a new activity comment 6 years, 11 months ago
Aw, we’ll miss you, File!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic April 2019 Accountability in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 6 years, 11 months ago
-Finish Part 1 of WIP
-Finish first draft of short story
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Guild Improvement Ideas in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 6 years, 11 months ago
@catwing That sounds fun. I doubt I could rarely be on, though… but I’d try to make time!
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Linyang Zhang changed their profile picture 6 years, 11 months ago
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Short Story Contest in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
Ooh I really want to participate if my mom lets me…but I’ve been planning this story out for months, and I can’t wait to start writing it…
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic April 2019 Accountability in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 6 years, 11 months ago
Welp, May already, but…
-Finish Part 1 of WIP
-Start short story for contest
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Week 8: Writing Life; Forming Consistent Writing Habits (Maddie Morrow) in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
I really needed this. Basically after NaNoWriMo last year I’ve been on a writing hiatus, and today’s the day I told myself I would finish part 1 of my WIP. But look, it’s today, and I still have like 50 pages left to write.
I’m hoping with a new month I can get back into my 5pg/day routine again… π
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic April 2019 Accountability in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 7 years ago
-Finish part one of current WIP before May
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic NAMES!! (help) in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years ago
Hmm I don’t have any off the top of my head but I do have a Pinterest board here: https://www.pinterest.com/devastatelasting/names/
Hope this helps!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic April 2019 Accountability in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 7 years ago
Hmm yeah you’re not the only one, this newΒ interface will need some getting used to. Instead of sitting around a campfire instead it’s now like sitting in an office (though I don’t mind, it looks nice π ).
Yeah, my goals:
-Write eight pages a day this week
-Finish part one by the end of this month
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Linyang Zhang's profile was updated 7 years ago
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic April 2019 Accountability in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 7 years ago
-Write five pages per day
-Slog through piano
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