[CarolineTheWriter]

@Arindown

Hi Gracie!

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it! I don’t have many plans for Max at the moment, but I’ll try to keep that in mind anyway- thanks for the feedback!

Yes, I’m not worrying too much about the edits- I just would like to hear from people as I write so that I can get better :).

~Caroline

When the world seems to fall around you- remember that God is still with you.

[CarolineTheWriter]

@writergirl101

Thanks again, Ella! 🙂

When the world seems to fall around you- remember that God is still with you.

[CarolineTheWriter]

@writergirl101 (me hoping this tag thing works)

Thanks so much, Ella! I’ll turn on suggestions on the file for you- here is an updated link, but you should be able to just refresh the original one as well https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CLGkxJoN4xpEgEAIID49i2UcKjIgBQRFy6gojpNcfQg/edit?usp=sharing

I’m so glad you liked it!

1. Ah, yeah, I didn’t think about that!

2. oops I sometimes do that- comments/suggestions on the doc are now on!

3. Agh, yes, the show don’t tell thing always gets me, so please do highlight that!

4. Okay- I’ll think about that. I’m much more of Discovery Writer/Pantser sort of writer so some things about Jackie are still in the works, like her reaction to things haha.

Thanks so much for your help! Feel free to tag me whenever you need a chapter to critique- and I’ll probably have the second one of this up for critique soon as well!

When the world seems to fall around you- remember that God is still with you.

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