BrookeWolf

Hey!

First off I wanna apologize to everyone for my long absence.  I didn’t intend to become an inactive member, but it’s been several months since I’ve got on here, so I’m really sorry.  Life has been crazy for me right now and I just couldn’t seem to find the time when I wasn’t distracted or focused on something else.  I’ll try to be much be…[Read more]

@christianna-hellwig, thank you so much!

I am 100% willing to accept any help you can give me, and I really hope you’ve enjoy reading it.

I totally agree with you about female soldiery.  I’ve written many female characters in action stories before, with lots of fighting and killing.  In fact, one of my other female characters was in a milit…[Read more]

@libby thank you so much! Any help you can give me is extremely appreciated, and don’t worry about the time frame, there’s no rush at all.

I personally don’t like critiquing either.  I don’t like the pressure and having to be the one to point out problems with other people’s writing.  But I know it’s an important part of the process.

Tha…[Read more]

That’s okay, I totally get it.  Thanks for replying anyway, and good luck with your other project! 🙂

Oh, I feel like I should give a few more details about the story….

So, it’s set in a totally fictitious world, but isn’t really fantasy.  It’s written like modern day, with some reference to to futuristic tech.  So I’m not exactly sure what genre it fits in, to be honest….

The MC is a young private names Talon, and he’s almost totally D…[Read more]

I got a total of 16,161 words, @faith_blum :). Not as much as I wanted, but the best I could do.

So, my final word count is only 16161 words. (What an odd pattern that is…) But it was the best I could do this crazy month.

I hope most of you did better than I did. 😉

Good luck!

I think I wrote about 18 thousand words, but I’m gonna open up my laptop and check before the night is over.  I wanted to do more, but ended up traveling and didn’t have time.

Good luck to us!

Wow!  I read it, and I gotta say, it’s beautiful, and so, so convicting.

I’m sorry I can’t really think of a way to help with editing or have anything to point out, but I really loved it! 🙂

Hello!  I’d like to start by saying to take everything I say with a grain of salt, because I am definitely not the most experienced writer on earth, and have plenty of problems of my own.

But I’ve been writing a villain recently in my WIP, so I thought maybe I could help.  He’s a psychopathic, chilling, but perfectly brilliant character, with th…[Read more]

Wow!  I did not think I’d get much done this week, but I wrote a total of 8,769 words and finished the first draft of my short story.

Good luck to everyone else!

I got a ton of writing done last week.  Too bad that can’t count… 😉

I have a short story to finish, but my other WIPs are kinda on hold right now due to… ehem, Writer’s Block.

I’ll do my best though, maybe add a few hundred to the word count.

Good luck everyone else!

Last week’s goal went well.  I didn’t finish my short story yet, but last night, under the prompting of my best friend, and with the right music, I made an enormous amount of progress.  Basically got over the hard part.  I may finish the story today, or tomorrow.  My goals for this week are to do that, and also to try and make some progress on whe…[Read more]

~catches goodbye glitter~

Gonna miss you!