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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Abortion Poetry in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@k-a-grey @abigail-rebekah @holly-anne @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @kayla-skywriter @ashira @nuetrobolt
Hi, all! So, I was advised to add stronger images in my prologue. So- I changed it! I wanted a few opinions on how this one sounds compared to the first prologue…
Prologue:
I am hearing silent screams
From children with no choice.
God also calls my name:
“Time to give them a voice!”Thoughts? 🙂 Thanks!












