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@daeus-lamb   Great mostly, but I’d probably shorten them both. For TDoN, I would take out the part that he is not the MC; that kinda gives away a cool part of the story. For TGZ, I agree with others that ‘shocking image’ is probably not the best phrase to use, because it may suggest something horror or even sexual. Unfortunately, even though I don’t think it’s good, I have no suggestion as of now as to make it better. Sorry. I’ll come back if I think of a suggestion.