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Andrew Schmidt replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 9 months ago
@Dakota, nice job! I really like how you began the poem… “Flower, you’re crowned with a jewel-like bud, But all you think about is that you’re planted in mud.”
I mean, I like the entire poem, but I like, especially, these particular sentences, or the opening to the poem. Keep it up! 😀










