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Okay, what do think about this plot? I am planning to have it be a series (just decided) but anyway, I’d like anyone’s thoughts on it. The Theme is about stubbornness if that helps, the focusing question is about when is it alright to be stubborn, and the answer is that it’s best to be stubborn when you (actually) hold the right answers. Okay, if you think I should change that theme, I’d like your thoughts on it too, but I’m mainly here for the plot.

Beginning: Nightjay and Susan, with the help of some friends, seek out to rescue Gareth and a bunch of others on a mission.

Inciting Event: Starting a grand journey to Algrenock Castle where Master Wreath stands, they meet evil beasts and beings of all kinds as they venture throughout the globe.

First Plot Point: Seeking to make peace with the monsters of the Forgotten Forest so they can defeat the evil, Nightjay continues his journey – meeting more friends each time and stubbornly ignoring advice. But can all of those friends be trusted?

Mid Plot Point: When Yardan comes up with a disastrous plan stop Nightjay and deliver them into the hands of the links, he causes a great disturbance. But Yardan does not get a reward, and instead misfortune.

Third Plot Point: As Susan and a handful of his friends has fallen into the Indigo’s hands because of Nightjay’s un-careful ways, he is forced to rescue them, while Gareth and bunch others are still held prisoners as Algrenock Castle.

Climax: Nightjay goes back to the Forgotten Forest for help, but instead is captured in Monster Pelton’s ruthless ways. He has to fight his way out, but his stubborn ways have led him to his doom. But when he attempts an escape, he is tested in a way never before.

Resolution: When the monsters have tested him – and see his true colors – they have the results they wish for out of Nightjay and are now willing to help, despite the fact that Pelton was only there for the profit. But how will they defeat Master Wreath of the blackshards, General Indigo of the links, and seek out all the lost friends scattered across the lost lands of the vallucks? Their journey still continues.

@josiah @deaus-lamb @mariposa