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@winter_rose I tried finding your last post, from my emails,
“General Quillon! A Separatist battleship has just emerged from hyperspace!” The pilot said in a rush.
“Send word to the Republic. We are under attack!” Ivaylo said, and then turned to the others. “Get the king to an escape pod. We can’t afford to have him captured.”
“So you really think we’ll get captured, then,” Goane said.
“I’m being cautious, Padawan. I will never be underprepared if I prepare for the worst.”
“Got it,” Goane said. “But there is still a possibility we’ll get away, right?”
At that moment the ship shuddered violently as explosions racked the starboard hull. The lights flickered for a moment before shutting off completely.
“No,” Ivaylo said grimly as the pilot returned and informed them that all power had been lost.
Goane rushed off to find Jaina. The ship jolted as it was caught in a tractor beam.
They were now at the mercy of the Separatists.
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Maybe the damaged republic ship crashes back into the planet? And then everyone on the planet repairs it and uses it to rescue the others.
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Yeah.Thanks!
So technically i can go on ahead, I think, but maybe you can find my last one that went in between the last one you did before this one and this one?
"If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott
Oh yeahh!! That’s a great idea. I’ll go find your post…
What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.
(Ok I actually found a couple of posts so those are all here)
~~~~~Solstice and Zeinli scaled the trees and scanned their surroundings.
It looked like all of the wolf-people had retreated back into their city. Thank the Force. Solstice didn’t think this ragged group could take one more hit.
From where she peered out of the trees, Solstice saw the capital city, which was battered but recovering. The wolf soldiers were marching back into it.
Smoke rose in the distance. Maybe it was a settlement, or more native rebels.
Solstice and Zeinli exchanged looks before leaping to the ground. Most everyone was resting now.
“Our only options for getting a ship is to steal one from the capital, or try to find a settlement,” Zeinli said.
Solstice glanced around at the many wounded. “I don’t believe we’re in any condition to attempt either,” she said.
“They need rest,” Cresh said, looking up from where he knelt on the ground. “Some of these men can’t go any further.”
“I agree,” Zeinli said. She massaged her head, and her eyes were half closed with exhaustion. “We will make camp here tonight, and determine our best course of action in the morning.”
“I can help Cresh take care of the injured,” Solstice volunteered. “Our medic Jayce has taught me a few things, and I’m able to use a bit of Force healing.”
After walking around and aiding many troopers, Zeinli sat down herself and leaned back against a tree. Bo’ came and joined her and they began to converse softly as the evening brought on shadows in the forest.
Cresh let Solstice use the Force on the clones with the worst of it while he was bandaging others, often glancing around the trees warily. It would be a miracle if they lasted the night.. . . . . . .
Ivaylo frowned as the Republic ship took off. Those around him began to relax, but he remained tense.
“What’s bothering you, master Ivaylo?” Goane asked. “I mean, besides our leaving Zeinli and Solstice stranded on a primitive planet with no visible way of escape.”
Ivaylo gave Goane a strange look. Goane shrugged.
Ivaylo shook his head. “They let us go. It was the only reason for the ease of our escape.”
“Easy?” Jaina asked indignantly. “You call that easy?”
“I mean, it wasn’t easy but I see what Master Ivaylo was saying..” Goane replied, gazing at her with sparkling eyes.
Jaina nodded, “Elek, Goane, ni kar’taylir, cyar’ika.” She said softly.Goane only grinned at her, that playful, dazzling smile, and she turned to check on those of her squad who ha made it aboard.
The young Padawan watched her go, then turned back to Ivaylo, who had seen this and was definitely not amused.What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.
@winter_rose I’ll try to reply to this when I can.
However I thought of a certain character I would love to see drawn. This chara is from the rebellion time era of ness I have going. I wrote an entire chapter just to introduce her, the chapter was called The Missing Spectre, and I just.. I love it.
Anywho, this chara’s looks and features are a bit detailed and demanding, and I may be picky.Also if you’re busy then that’s okay, I really under you don’t have to. I just thought you may want to.
"If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott
Ok, and take all the time you need, I won’t be super active for the next month or so anyways…
I’d really like to try and draw your character, but I have been pretty busy… could you maybe give me her description, and I can get the drawing to you when I finish, even if it takes a while?
What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.
@winter_rose
Ciool, yea I understand.
I would like a version of her as a nine year old, maybe one of her older but the nine year old is what I’ve been writing lately.
This is the description of when she first appeared.
“She had lekku like a Twi’lek, her skin was a blotched combination of both green and a light tan, she had Kanan’s ears and chin, but Hera’s eyebrows, nose and mouth. Her eyes were Hera’s, but they were Kanan blue. She had Hera’s aura and grace but Kanan’s confidence and swagger. She smiled slightly, a sassy and sarcastic yet soft and gentle smile.”*jumps around excitedly* ack
"If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott
I think that she’ll be really cool to try and draw! Does she have a name? And I’m curious what her story is, because if she is Kanan’s and Hera’s kid… I just want to know all how she fits in with canon and stuff. XD
What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.
She does have a name. Several actually. Depending on where she is and who she’s with she’s had to go under pseudonyms.
Her real name is Depa-Billaba Nima Jarrus.
And eventually you will meet her in my fanfic. Whenever we eventually get to the Rebellion era. I do try to stay as canon as possible but I couldn’t help but add this in. XD
You could read a rough draft of the chapter now, however you would get spoiled for some stuff that happens during the clone wars and after that, of which you don’t know about as of yet. 😉"If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott
Ooo, interesting.
I’ll wait to read it until I’m past the parts that will be spoiled because spoilers are like, SOO annoying. 😂
What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.
yep. Doing her as a nine year old should just be her standing there, I know her facial features with be a bit demanding.
However if you would also like to do her around 14 years old, then I’d like her standing with a Rebel Pilot helmet under one arm and a blue lightsaber in her other hand, with Kanan’s lightsaber hanging from her utility belt. 😉
Spoilers are horrible yea. Of course this will require loads of patience cause you will have to wait from 21bby to 1aby and that will take a long time.. XD 😀
"If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott
Sounds good!
Yep, that is a long time. 😭
What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.
Cioolio! 😀
yeppers. XP
"If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott
So, what sort of outfit should she be wearing? And also, does she have something like Hera’s twi’lek head covering?
What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.
@winter_rose I was actually talking to a friend about this the other day.
I’d like y’all to experiment with clothing, with both a mix of Kanan and Hera. I think her headpiece would be very similar to Hera but with something Kanan-y maybe? I can see blue clothing, but honestly idk how good that would look Lolol
when she’s 15-15 age:
“You know like how in the first two seasons Kanan had the armor on one arm? She could have something like that, maybe not the exact same ones he had, but something similar.”
“Hmm… maybe she would have armor then, but not as… obvious as Kanan’s was. Like maybe vambraces and guards on her upper arm, maybe a sleeker version of Kanan’s shoulder guard to give her outfit a more feminine feel. Ooo, maybe take some inspiration from armor used on Ryloth, if they use armor there.”
That’s what my friend my friend and I thought of."If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott
Ok! I like designing character outfits so this’ll be fun. 😀
What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.
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