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  • #146258
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

      Thank you! You’re so talented

      "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

      #146262
      Winter Rose
      @winter_rose

        @emma-walker

        Aww, thank you! That means a lot 😊.

        What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

        #156104
        Emma Walker
        @emma-walker

          @winter_rose Hello!!

          Its been such a long time!

          "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

          #156242
          Winter Rose
          @winter_rose

            @emma-walker

            Hello!! Sorry for the late reply.

            Indeed, it has been a very long time!  How was 2022 for you?

            Would you like to continue the roleplay? Or start a new one?  I’m open to any ideas you may have. 😁

            What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

            #156247
            Emma Walker
            @emma-walker

              @winter_rose Heyyy.
              It was good! I think I tried emailing you not too long ago too?

              I actually had the most amazing idea that goes great with my Depa Jarrus! 😀

              we Can keep going with the roleplay if you’d like. If we can figure out what we were doing lol!

              "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

              #156248
              Winter Rose
              @winter_rose

                @emma-walker

                Sweet!

                Oh, I must not have seen.  Sorry! My primary email is raspberryrose05 at gmail.com if you ever need to reach me again and if you didn’t already have it.

                Really? What is your idea?

                Okay! I’ll look back and see what exactly is going on in this story….

                • This reply was modified 2 years, 3 months ago by Winter Rose.

                What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                #156250
                Emma Walker
                @emma-walker

                  @winter_rose yeahhh wby?

                  Hmmm… what was the gmail you used for when I sent the sw fanfic doc…? Because I might’ve emailed the wrong person Lolol

                  Hehe actually… I might send you the story. It starts as a rp with a friend with rebels charas but then I wrote the rest. And I love this new character………..

                   

                  lol kk

                  "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

                  #156251
                  Winter Rose
                  @winter_rose

                    @emma-walker

                    I learned a lot last year, haha.  It was a crazy year but it was good.

                    No, I see the email.  I have two emails and I don’t regularly check the one I gave to you 🫤.  That was my bad.

                    Hehe sounds super cool!! Yes, shoot me the story, I’d love to read it.

                    What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                    #156252
                    Emma Walker
                    @emma-walker

                      @winter_rose That’s greattttt

                      Ah lol, okay.

                      okay cool. Let me edit it some and I will.

                      "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

                      #156253
                      Winter Rose
                      @winter_rose

                        Okay!

                        It looks like the last things that happened is the group with Solstice, Zeinli, Cresh, Bo’, and Rookie are in the forest planning their next course of action, and the rest of them (including the king and the prince) are on a republic ship that has just been captured by the Separatists.

                        My original idea was for the characters to repair the republic ship once it crashed to earth, but maybe they hire someone to fly them on a rescue mission instead.  Or Dooku could even take and imprison Ivaylo’s group on a different planet, forcing Zeinli’s group to wait until the Republic can pick them up before even considering a rescue mission.  What do you think?

                        What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                        #156259
                        Emma Walker
                        @emma-walker

                          @winter_rose either way is fine with me lol

                          "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

                          #156260
                          Emma Walker
                          @emma-walker

                            @winter_rose either way is fine with me lol

                            "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

                            #156262
                            Emma Walker
                            @emma-walker

                              I guess I should go back and review what all just happened.

                              "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

                              #156263
                              Winter Rose
                              @winter_rose

                                @emma-walker

                                I think the second one would be cool.  It would give us a new setting to work with as well.

                                Yeah that might be helpful.  I only skimmed a few of the older posts though.

                                Oh yeah, would you be able send me the descriptions of your characters again? I tried to find the file in older posts but it didn’t seem to be working.

                                . . . . . . . . .

                                (On board the captured Republic ship)

                                It was a losing battle from the start.  Despite the superiority of the clone troopers, the droids vastly outnumbered Ivaylo’s force and pressed forward with a mindless, brutal commitment to kill.

                                A scream ripped through the air.  The fighting faltered.  The only sound was the buzz of the lightsabers.

                                Ivaylo turned, and snarled. Count Dooku held Agent Jaina against his blood-red blade.  It’s crimson light danced across her armor in frenzied spasms. Two assassin droids pointed guns at the heads of both the king and the prince.

                                “Drop your weapons,” Dooku said.  Ivaylo narrowed his eyes and lifted his saber towards Dooku.  Dooku pressed his lightsaber closer to Jaina.  Not a flicker of empathy or remorse crossed his cold expression.

                                What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                                #156264
                                Emma Walker
                                @emma-walker

                                  @winter_rose I’m so sorry I must’ve accidentally deleted the doc…

                                  Lets see… General Zeinli Danu-Windu, her Padawan Goane, and Clone Captain Bo’.
                                  There’s also her cousin, a Mando and part of a sect in the Order but not a Jedi, although he has a lightsaber. Lt. Will Danu.

                                  Then there was Agent Jaina Danu, his sister, an agent for the republic. She has a squad of clones called the Jaig Squad.
                                  Clones Lt. Steady, Special Ops Broker, Jet Trooper Noaa, Medic Cresh, and heavy gunner Reel.

                                  Describing appearances would take a whole lot longer…

                                   

                                  Ill have to figure out where all my people were because we split them all up..

                                  "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

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