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  • #125503
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    @winter_rose

    Hmm idk a battle would be most likely, but… hmm… there’s only one battle where Jaig squad would join the legion in a battle… so it’s not likely.. unless we did that specific battle

    honestly they could run into each other in barracks or something. Idk wdyt?

     

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #125504
    Winter Rose
    @winter_rose

    @emma-walker

    honestly they could run into each other in barracks or something.

    So they meet when there’s not a battle or like, before a battle?

    What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

    #125505
    Winter Rose
    @winter_rose

    @emma-walker

    Oh I forgot to mention that Solstice has a pale green lightsaber and Ivaylo has a yellow one.

    What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

    #125506
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    @winter_rose

    they could, or the council could’ve assigned them on a group battle/mission and they get together to plan accordingly, whatever you think seems more likely

    sounds ciool

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #125507
    Winter Rose
    @winter_rose

    @emma-walker

    Yeah, probably a group mission. They could

    a) rescue someone important/ break someone out of prison/ protect someone

    b) negotiate peace for a civil war or a new planet joining the Republic  or something

    c) spy on some suspicious person who is suspected of Separatist sympathy

    d) blow something up (like a droid factory or enemy base)

    e) all of the above 😉

    What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

    #125508
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    @winter_rose

    E definitely XD

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #125509
    Winter Rose
    @winter_rose

    @emma-walker

    Ok, e it is then!!

    Should the roleplay start with them boarding a ship and just kind of getting to know each other?

    Ok, so King Whatever of Planet so-and-so is trapped and under siege in his capital city. This is because he rejected the Separatists’ offer, and his main governor turned on him (which they find out when they catch the governor holo-chatting with Dooku or Grievous or someone), so now almost half his kingdom and a bunch of battle droids are against the king. So our people are sent to get him safely so he can join the Republic and get their help. But when they meet him he says that the Separatists are building a base nearby, and they go and disable it before it can cause trouble.

    Eh that sounds like a full movie length but we’ll make it choppy.

    Is that all good with you?

    What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

    #125510
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    @winter_rose

    All that sounds good!

    Ya wanna start it off?

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #125511
    Winter Rose
    @winter_rose

    @emma-walker

    Sure I guess? I wouldn’t be able to write much until tomorrow, though, so if you want to go ahead and start that’s good with me.

    What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

    #125512
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    @winter_rose

    hmmm

    ……

    The Danu’s, Bo’, and Jaina’s boys all boarded the ship, the Encounter. They were assigned, with another group, to go to the planet, (makes up planet) Aturrose, to help the king.

    He had been trapped when the separatists took his capital under siege.

    Zeinli glanced at Bo’, her captain, who looked back at her through his visor. It would be a difficult mission, but at least another team had also been assigned.

    As they stepped down a hall, Zeinli turned to the team. “Will, Bo’ and Goane, you three come with me to the bridge. Jaina, you stay with you men and keep an eye on them.” She gave a pointed look and gestured to a certain clone in her squad. Reel had caught a moth outside and was now enthusiastically showing it to a fellow clone.

    Jaina took off her maroon, Mandalorian helmet and nodded, silently laughing as she gazed at Reel. She turned back to her cousin, “Call me if you need me.”

    Zeinli nodded and followed her guys toward the bridge.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #125515
    Winter Rose
    @winter_rose

    ~~~

    “Master Ivaylo, tell me again where we’re going?” Solstice asked as she and the rest of team entered the Encounter.

    “You’ll see,” Ivaylo grunted.

    “Gryphon, where are we going?” Solstice turned the clone commander. Gryphon quickly briefed her on the mission as they boarded The Encounter.

    “Three extraction teams,” Solstice murmured, half to herself. “They must think we’ll need a lot of help.”

    “Well, you’ve got it, right here.” A new voice said. Solstice looked up and met the mischievously flashing eyes of another Padawan.

    “Hey, I’m Goane. Master Zeinli’s apprentice. You’re… Solstice, right?” The humanoid grinned and stuck out his hand.

    “Yes,” Solstice smiled as she shook the offered hand.

    “It’s a pleasure to meet you, Commander Solstice,” Goane said elegantly, and turned down the hall. “C’mon, I’ll introduce you to everyone.”

    “Thank you, Goane. But I’m not a commander,” Solstice said with a twisted smile. “It’s just Captain for now.”

    ~~~

    Sorry it’s a little short, but I got to go now!

    • This reply was modified 3 years, 9 months ago by Winter Rose.

    What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

    #125519
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Zeinli looked up from a holographic map and saw her young Padawan leading in the other team. She silently pressed a button on her wristcom to alert Jaina.

    Will took off his Mandalorian helmet and watched.

    Goane grinned, “this is Captain Bo’,” he gestured towards the Clone captain, who gave a silent nod. Goane turned to Will, “this is lieutenant Will Danu, and this-” he turned to his master, “Is Master Zeinli Danu-Windu.”

    Before the boy could continue the introductions, Jaina walked in with her men.

    Most of her boys were silent as they followed her. Reel, however, skipped over to Solstice to show her his moth.

     

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #125523
    Winter Rose
    @winter_rose

    A smile tugged at Solstice’s lips as she looked down at Reel’s moth. It seemed so out of place in this artificial environment, in the black-gloved palm of a soldier. Similar to how Reel seemed a little out of place with the battle veterans of the team…

    Something rushed by Solstice’s leg.

    “Daniel NO!” Solstice grabbed the black Loth-cat mid-pounce. Reel stepped back, shielding the moth with his hand. “I’m sorry,” Solstice said, and then glared at Daniel. “Bad kitty.”

    “It’s all right,” Reel said with a wave of his hand. He released the moth, and as the little insect fluttered off Daniel twitched his tail and watched as it disappeared safely into a ventilation shaft.

    “If we have in infestation of moths I’m blaming you,” Broker called to Reel.

    “If that happens, just blame Daniel.” Solstice winked to Reel. Daniel let out an angry yowl, and wriggled out of Solstice’s grip. The Loth-cat leapt from her arms onto Reel’s helmet.

    Solstice covered her mouth to suppress her giggling. Reel shook his head, once, twice, but the cat remained. Solstice reached up to remove the cat, but Daniel swatted her hand away. Reel’s attempt was met with similar results.

    “Does the cat… do this a lot?” Will asked as he approached them, one eyebrow cocked.

    “No,” Solstice said, recovering herself. “He likes you, Reel. This is some form of… bonding… ceremony.”

    “That’s a bright side here, at least!” Reel said, a grin in his voice.

    What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

    #125524
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Steady gazed at his clone companion for a moment before walking to Jaina, who had circled with the Jedi Knight and Master, and Will and Bo’.

    They were gazing at the holographic map and trying to work out a plan.

    “I suggest we split into groups.” Zeinli was saying. “We will need a group to be a distraction, and one to rescue the king, as well as others on standby for backup or other tasks we overlooked.”

    Jaina looked at the map and suppressed a giggle. Goane had just spoke to her mentally, standing in the other group behind her. She tried to hide her smile but looked up to see her brother staring at her with an unreadable expression on his face. She immediately hardened her own expression, like stone.

    Zeinli turned to the Jedi master Ivaylo, “What do you think, Master?”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #125525
    Winter Rose
    @winter_rose

    Ivaylo’s eyes narrowed as he studied the map. Glowing red dots covered the display of the capital, signifying where droid battalions or native rebels were posted.

    “Your plan will work well, Zeinli,” Ivaylo said. “I will take Gryphon and another clone in to rescue the king. Solstice will go with Jaig squad. Will and Solstice, if your team engages, make sure they see both of your lightsabers.”

    “Why would we want that?” Goane spoke up. “Shouldn’t we keep our full strength secret as long as possible?” Ivaylo met Goane’s eyes with a hard look.

    “We want them to think that all of our forces are in the city,” Jaina said, face lighting up as she caught Ivaylo’s drift.  “They can’t suspect that Master Ivaylo is in the castle. They’ll see two masters and two apprentices, and assume that’s all we brought.” Ivaylo nodded approvingly. Solstice shot Jaina a mildly envious look.

    “Skipper, Murk, Rookie, Alec, you’ll go with General Zeinli,” Gryphon said. “Jak, Zak, and Jayce, you’re with Agent Jaina.” The soldiers saluted Gryphon with a chours of “Yes sir!” and began to organize themselves accordingly.

    ~~~~

    So, how exactly does the hierarchy work from the generals down to the clone soldiers? I just keep getting confused on who’s in charge of who, and I’m not sure I’m doing it right, and was just wondering what kind of system you’re using. Right now I kind of have General-Commander-Captain-Lieutenant (which I don’t have…)- Trooper

    What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

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