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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
I just subscribed! And it’s so refreshing to see Aydin as a bigger person. (that sounded weird, but whatever).
Thank you! I really appreciate it!
Oh, yes, absolutely! This is so different from his pre-arc interactions with Chantara, I was shocked. He used to be much more tolerant toward her, it’s very satisfying to see him get really mad at her for once, she deserves it! Also letting Liorah just punch her was immensely satisfying XD
I love how almost all characters have the reaction of “I’m going to set you free but I’m also going to punch you now I have the chance” XD
@everyone I think after this challenge is over I’m gonna pull Quin and Qatar, and introduce a new character of mine, if that’s okay with everybody?
Awesome! I can’t wait to meet them! I’ll be doing the same thing, I want to get someone else in here for a while!
@everyone
I can either bring in Mejt, the MC from my “Pirate novel” or Athena and Ophelia from the mystery!
Athena and Ophelia already have an interesting dynamic which will be fun to work from, but Mejt is indivudually very interesting and they all need development XD
Ophelia is a ballet student and Athena does something with criminology. (I thought forensics first but I’m leaning more toward the psychologial side of it so I’m not sure)
Mejt is a seamstress and the daughter of a lighthouse keeper.
Ophelia is light-hearted and a bit ditsy and naive. She seems a stereotypical dumb blonde, though she’s much smarter than she appears.
Athena is pretty calculating and clever, though less empathetic than Ophelia.
Mejt is kind, but bitter and very sly and secretive when it comes down to it.
Who do y’all vote for?
You were not kidding when you said that we would loathe Chantara. I have only read two pages concerning her, and she’s already made me want to yell at her (I’m not physically strong enough to slap her so I’ll settle for a passionate shouting match).
Ha, that was my one true goal! 😀 I’m glad you loathe her as much as I do! She’s truly a horrible person, and this is like her ultimate low point of the worst villainy. She used to be a bit more sympathetic but she kept getting worse as the story wore on.
Concerning Aydin, I love seeing the effects of his growth! And I also loved hearing compare Chantara’s reaction to his hand with Faye’s! If needed, I will eagerly whip up a ship name for those two.
I love it too! I’m so proud of how he’s growing 🥰
Oh, yes, Fayedin is absolutely a ship! I love them so much, they’re adorable! I considered getting Faye into the castle for a while, but there isn’t much to see because they’re both oblivious and shy so it’s just mutual pining XD
I’ve recently realized that while Khalon’s actions in the Castle were more or less accurate, his thoughts and motivations were astoundingly inaccurate. So here is an improved Khalon (improved meaning more selfish, more cold, and more conflicted XD)
I loved reading it! He isn’t as nice, but he’s so much more interesting! I like it a lot more!
That was facinating to read! It was very in character but I didn’t really expect it! I love how protective Klein is, it makes me like him so much more!












