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  • Rose replied to the topic Story Quote Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago

    Hi guys! This looks like fun! Hope you don’t mind that I join in 😉

    @kylie-wingfeather

    (Still really want to see yours, Kylie!)

    Here are the first two lines from my first book:

    I didn’t think twice. If I had, I might not have rushed into the cloud of purple smoke.

    Yeah, that summarizes Liorah’s character pretty well XD. I’d love critique! Does it work as a first line?

    @arindown

    I actually have some more pieces I’m pretty proud of. Are you allowed to post more than once?

    I’ll tag…

    @this-is-not-an-alien

     

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