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@mischievous-thwapling @joelle-stone @winter_rose

Hey guys! I’ve been out of town for a week, so before I vote I’m gonna catch up on the previous stuff from page 39.

•  Joelle’s plot list:

Sounds very good. Thanks for putting all that together!

So, who is the Kid? I think I missed out on the times we talked about him… and I know nothing about him. Does he have any details developed yet?

You’re plan for Vika sounds cool, whatever it is 😛

And I do remember the apprenticeship idea, which I really like.

for #13, that sounds good. I’ll address my thoughts further below 🙂

• Winter Rose’s developmental questions 😀

Who’s character is Sikya? The “sisterhood-pact-thing” for Vika and Sikya (best friends tho, not mortal enemies) sounds like it would be good. It puts that emotional relationship-tie into things, and I’m pretty big on that kind of thing. The names being similar… I mean I don’t think it’s that big of a deal. All depends, I guess.

What Thwap put about the refueling on planets thing is a pretty good outlook. It could go either way, really. Add in excess bunny trails, or have cool adventure. We’ll see.

Don’t the losers disappear as they lose the game? They’ll get eliminated, and then no one really knows where they go or what happened to them, and they’re actually being held somewhere in the Resilience until they can be sold into slavery or something.

This sounds pretty good to me, except people might start getting suspicious. So, we could stick with them disappearing as soon as they lose, or they could stay around till the Winner party, and ooooh, maybe they could be “collected” and sold during that (except that might be complicated writing 2 plot aspects that are happening at the same time). Idk, what do you all think?

And yes, they’re being sold into slavery *evil cackle*

And Menace64, what was the purpose of that group again? And I have no idea who’s in it…

maybe they discover some sort of plot when they catch Ember/the Kid meeting with one of his cohorts, or something.

So, is the Kid good or bad? And Joelle’s idea to catch him in Part 2 sounds very good to me.

 

And yes, they’re trying out for all of the branches, as far as I remember.

Mmmmkay, and now for voting 😛

MELODY