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@kate I know I’m late to the discussion, but this sounds really good! 😀

Only thing I would add to what @daeus-lamb did is that the phrase “out to get” seems a little out of style with the rest of it. Maybe something like “the same mysterious foe is also after his childhood playmate,” or “the same mysterious foe has sinister plans for his childhood playmate,” or something like that.

Other than that, I think it’s a very intriguing summary that nicely fits the story! 😀