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@daeus-lamb Ooohh… I like this one: “Heroes are born to dream, but some dreams come to haunt them.” I like it a lot. And not that I don’t like “When heroes fail, the Songkiller rises”, but I feel like it’s too… *narrows eyes and waves hand around in the air* …Too something.  I read it and I go: “Ok. Cool. So what?” Whereas, with the first one, you give me just enough for me to put together a complete thought, and then I’m left wondering, “What dreams? I want to read about these dreams. I want to read about the hero who has these dreams.”

I hope that helps??