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Okay so i was trying to talk to my friend and telling her just to not put too much jesus cheese in it, so unessisary extra things just so it sounds ‘christian’ but its not very powful just comes off as cheesy. But she was taking it the wrong way and like saying God had helped her so much and how could she not put things about how he’s faithful through the storm, and her character is grown very much becsuse of God ect ect.  But she was completely missing my point. Yes put it in,  but don’t force it in to every scene cuz its christian, and don’t make as soon as they are everything will go perfect and be rainbows and sunshines. Cuz its not. Sometimes it doesn’t seem like he answers, sometimes you doubt him, or doubt his plan, ect.

And @josiah i know what I’m calling the jesus chese with you helping giving critiques of my story. Of yes Yuri in stuck in the repeat completely excepting and everything going perfect is too cheesy. And the other one will Character just happens to get saved before dying. Dont Jesus Cheese it.

So could you pleeeeaasse help say a way that i can tell my friend so she’ll understand??  I’m not saying don’t have jesus in it I’m just saying don’t make it cheesy and force it in everywhere just to make it more pleasing to God or Christian. Cuz then it looses its flavor.

@josiah @daeus-lamb @jane-maree @gabrielle-pullock @anyoneelsewhocanhelp