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AWW, LIN THOSE ARE ADORABLE. You did a really good job with Gisette’s parents. They definitely look like her, but they still look different, like they’re actual people. x3 Are you gonna name them??

At first, I was shocked, and then I was skeptical, but guys, throw me a welcome party, ’cause I just hopped on this ship. *melting*

GRACEE, I loved the script!! x’D When Kester told the guard to shut up, I was so shocked. Like, I hadn’t realized what a jerk he was!! >:O It’s so perfect. I think you did a really good job setting Kester’s weakness. I’m gonna need you guys to help me out in the next segment of the story, ’cause I’m not entirely sure how to set up Basil’s arc and display his weaknesses. Like, all I can think is to make it obvious that he doesn’t like people or trust them, and that he is a little eccentric. *shrugg*

I edited Bail’s lines a little, and refined/added his part of the story to the script.  
Anything that needs to be changed, please, lets change it.

Sarah/Slisby when and how do you want to introduce Clarion in the story? You don’t have to have an answer now, but maybe it would be good to think about that.

I think as far as the rest of the script writing goes, taking turns writing out parts/adding to it and then having everyone else read through and make changes/expanding on it like this seems to be an okayish idea? Any better ideas on how to write it?
… And then how much of the script should we do before stopping/waiting?  @april-j-rhys and @theclumsy_lamplighter might feel overwhelmed when they get back if we do too much more. (wowzers, they already have so much thread to read. xD SORRY GUYS)