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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic The Ereki Notebook in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@morreafirebird @allison-grace @devastate-lasting @lydia-writes @sarah-inkdragon
Here’s a line that I just wrote. Am I describing too little, too much, or just right? Do you have any suggestions?
“She felt rage of an unknown magnitude boil somewhere deep inside her; forming a monster that writhed just underneath her skin, yearning to be set free.” – *SPOILER*












