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  • Andrew started the topic Prologue in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago

    Hey, I was just making a prologue for this story.

    I’m more aiming towards funny and short. What do you think about it?

    Here it goes:

    Aspeldon was one of the many worlds linked together through the Connection.  The Connection as you know… well, connects the worlds, realms, and stuff-you-don’t-care-about all together to form this strange cluster of worlds which you have no idea about, oh, except for Earth.

    But one day, a citizen from Earth came swooshing around through the solar system on her spaceship… which ended up crashing into a nearby world: Aspeldon.

    She would have been captured by the links – the evil guards linking the worlds together for the Connection’s sake – but she escaped.

    Nightjay, the mysterious hybrid of a man and an elementmaker from the mystic world of Aspeldon, doing his duty, sought after the lost girl.

    One discovering her, he had realized she was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen… well, the most beautiful woman in Gemstone Woods at the moment.

    Anyway, they were fond of each other and became best friends. Nightjay had soon learned her name was Susan Vibrant, and she had learned was just simply Nightjay, which she had thought was extremely cool.

    As they went exploring Aspeldon, Nightjay talked about his world and Susan talked about hers. Earth, from what he had heard, had different creatures than he had here and seemed much more high-tech. But at the same time, Susan’s world didn’t really have any magic, so…

    Nightjay taught her how to make bubble-blaze pasta from a various mushroom, while Susan taught him how to make a phone, which reminded him very much of magic while…

    …there were still many evils within that land.

    Besides the ever-cursed links, there were also vallucks, very mischievous and chameleon-like. Then there was also the fairies, trolls, elves, giants, dwarves, and the many other kinds that lurked within the lands.

    Some of the one-of-a-kind species that people called ‘monsters,’  had all gathered up into the ‘Forgotten Forest,’ where no one dared to venture…  but since no one seemed to venture no one was sure if it was real anymore and therefore had started declaring it a myth. And because they had not thought it was real, they were devoured once they stepped foot into the forest.

    Then there were still the wicked blackshards of the land. Very cruel and evil in their ways.

    But Susan tried not to dwell on those thoughts, and instead interested herself in the odd things of the world as Nightjay led her to the elementmaker camp to discuss some weird plan that they had no idea what it was.

    But that was only the start of their great adventure.

    @the-fledgling-artist, @wordsmith, @evelyn, @nuetrobolt, @e-b-raulands, @jenwriter17, @rebecca-w

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