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  • William Norfleet replied to the topic I HAVE A POETIC CHALLENGE! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago

    @anne_the_noob14

    Thanks, I give to thee, my friend

    Of written lays that have no end

    Of thought, of depth, of possible

    Ideas that could be written down. 

    Your’s too, it truly, a work of art

    And though I wouldn’t praise mine so

    Your’s is too of the clouds, the gold

    Though maybe more the falling cold;

    The waters falling, sunset glint

    These glorious meanderings. 

    But still more glorious is the King

    Who made all things so beautifully.

    To Him I give my gratitude

    In Him eternally I place

    My faith bestowed upon me by

    His Son, Jesus Christ, my Lord. 

    I think these rhymes that we have writ

    And so contrived of all our “wit”

    Should so be set, continuous

    A poem they are for ongoing

    The conversation wielded

    By us upon a poem’s rhyme.

    ——-Very nice couplet you’ve made there!

    @k-a-grey

    Even while you write your thought

    A couplet made, a couplet wrought.

    Very nice your’s, too!

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