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  • W.O.Norfleet replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago

    @dakota

    Wow, this is great! The only things I could see wrong were in the second to last stanza, you forgot to add a space between “ere” and “long”. Btw, that’s one of my favourite words.

    Also, in the last line in the last two words, you capitalized the “j” in “Just me”. Not sure if you meant to, but otherwise, it was awesome!

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