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Zachary Holbrook posted an update 6 years, 3 months ago
@duskflower Here’s the link to the first 14k of the second draft of ‘The Lore of Yore’. I’ve expanded it significantly, adding a lot more depth to Keylori’s character and her relationships.
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Hi! I’m sorry for being so flaky on you. Is it still at a state where my feedback would be useful? The last two months have been an exhausting mess of school and health issues, but I’m on spring break now (and, as you can guess, my schedule is VERY empty) and would be happy to do some reading if that’s still what you need!
I’ve been chopping away at the second draft of ‘The Lore of Yore’. At about 60k words, the manuscript is about halfway done and overall a lot better than the original. I’ve joined an online writing group a few months ago that formed through SE, and they’ve given me a lot of helpful feedback. Overall, I think it would be most helpful if you read it all at once after I finish it, so I can get an idea of what a reader’s experience with the story as a whole is. Although I probably won’t have that ready until mid-summer (it’s turning out to be quite the epic) so I understand if you have less time then.
Feel free to check out the link to the first 3 chapters if you want.